Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20180905160147/@comment-29414935-20181119132412

JoxFox2109 wrote: Do you remember my comedy found footage-style story where I had just one big villain who I was thinking he was Pure Evil? I have another two villains in this story who I think also counts and that they stand out different from each other. I don't ask you a long time, if my villains are Pure Evil so I thought it would be fun to talk with you again about it. And another thing, I now tell you what the normal standard villainy in these stories are, so you can decide it better, if you know the general standard. The general standard in this story is, antagonists/villains who are more jerks or thiefs, and are presented always in a funny and comedic way. There are not many villain in the story, but a few little ones and small bunch of big ones. So let's begin.

1. The first villain in this story. He pretends to be the father of the protagonist because he looks like him, but he captures the father and locked him in the basement of this abandoned house. He does that because he see that the father has a great life and has much money, he's envious. But what he done after that is heinous. He ruined the life of the father, by argue and fight with the family members and makes the real father stay in the bad light. He psychological abuses the son, he destroys property of others, he always locked the son away and takes most of his property, he fight with the wife which led to the divorce and later it is revealed he killed one family member and nobody notice it. Because his plan is to wipe out the whole family of the protagonist so nobody of them can "annoy" him anymore and nobody comes after his secret. Honestly, I don't know if he can match with the other villains anymore or if he is not as bad as they are, but you decide it.

2. A old man who randomly appears in a creepy forest and seems to be a nice and depressed guy to the protagonists as first. But it is later revealed that he is just a damnd soul who escaped hell. In his lifetime he was a often drunk man and barbaric. One day he killed his friends wife and little daughter and set the house on fire. His friend survived the fire with brandmarks, and want to revenge his family deaths. But the murderer already killed himself so he can't kill him anymore, so never can avenge the death of his family. When he was a demonic soul and got free because of the protagonists, he gruesomely killed one of the protagonists and nobody knows at first that he was behind the murder. He later forced the ghost of his ex-friends wife to be his rape victim but get's killed for good. I must say that the kills of the daughter and wife are offscreen and just telled by the deceased wife, but his other crimes that I talked about are onsceen and the effect from his offscreen crimes are also there.

3. A obsessed fan of the protagonist. He invide him and his family in his home at christmas and seems like a very nice and caring guy, but he then goes more and more creepier. When the family want to get home, he captures them in his house and basement, and force them to live with him. But they can escape from him. Later (a few years) the main protagonist and his partner are again captured by him and he got way worse then before. He is now a cannibalistic serial killer who eats the flesh of his victims. He then force the protagonists to eat the flesh of one of his victims and mentally tortures them. He then tries to eat the protagonists so "they are inside of him and can't leave anymore". I want shortly to go back to this. So would be the first one an example of "a formely heinous enough villain who gets overtrump by the later villains, who are more heinous than him" ?