Thread:Misry6/@comment-31330278-20190811230954/@comment-31330278-20190813201422

When I make conversations on the internet, it's easier with spaces between paragraphs.

1. Tyrant have no brother. He's one of a kind. Clashler is a nice name for the fatherly dragon though. But your idea for a pure evil brother and a redeemable one is like my current idea for "Mankind Reloaded". The protagonist is an orc named Hawarged, and he became part of mankind forces after the who know how many times his older brother Khelshot tried to kill him. Khelshot is based on Hitler, so he hate mankind approximately as much as he hate his own brother. He have no part at Tyrant's creation and no wish to sell his soul. Just an utter bloodlust, ferocious efficiency at killing his enemies (some of them were a whole platoon who caught him and burned his head with bombload of acid) and being born at the right time and place. Tyrant is the heavy and bigger bad, and Khelshot is the main antagonist. Do you have someone like Khelshot in your story?

2. I think I like Gunmar better. Alan Jonah could be a better character. Charles Dance had to work really hard for playing this guy. Most dragons doesn't have a sympathetic backstory, so well done for the originality :-). From your description, Volgron sounds both as Grimmel's foil and the bright reflection of Green Death.

3. My bad. I just assumed you like it, because this category is on your following list. But you do right about "Middle-Earth" universe being great. It's based on WW2. I know most of the symbolism (hobbits are jews, Sauron is Hitler, Saruman is Stalin, Gandalf is Churchill, Gollum is a judenrat, elves are America, Théoden's paralyzed state under Grima and Saruman's influence is Vichy France and so on). But what Smaug was meant to symbolize in this context?