Thread:BigBadSquid/@comment-31330278-20190826074514/@comment-31330278-20190920233334

1A. I wish I was intelligent enough to learn it. Good luck, bro :-). I have some computer science friends, so I can guess how busy you must be. I was informed that computer codes are built from combinations of 0 and 1. Does it also applies on Java and C++?

1B. Like an heroic Mister Grey. The girl's visions sounds like Bran Stark's visions, except your idea is better. Hope the girl will get a real leadership vs becoming the queen of the world for a consolation prize after the horrible things she went through. The villain (does he have a name/nickname yet?) sounds like a psychopath from the news. Was he meant to be pure evil?

2. Interesting symbolism which I didn't thought about myself :-). Also, you gave me an idea to consider Luke for some roles in "Neimerhold":

A. Josh the fox - A known Children murderer who became Maureen/General Tiger's backstabbing henchman. His only possible redeeming quality is getting killed by his boss in a rather brutal way. He'll die either by getting Karl Tanner's fate (Maureen will stab his head through his mouth with a stake) or being shot in his legs and break his head after a major falling (General Tiger).

B. General Tiger - A militaristic tiger who serves as the secondary antagonist of part 1. He established a metropolis constructed by 3 cities or so. Unlike Maureen, who film and upload her executions for repeating watch, General Tiger knows to restrain his sadism as long as needed. Think of his as a fascist and Maureen as a nihilist. One psychopath plotting against the other. He'll be either pure evil or an extremist. I might write him an idealistic daughter, whom he'll see as his magnum epos vs how a normal father see his daughter.

C. Rick - One of the possible settlement leaders in part 2. His settlement is called VIEW (stands for Victory In Enhanced Work). If someone who doesn't know any better will ask, i'll tell him/her that Rick is similar to Rick Grimes, but on bigger scale. He's the kind of guy who see idealism as naivety and break tables for what he see as the greater good and success, even if he isn't a democratic prime-minister in our standards, which will create a mutual suspicion between him and Courtney the fox.

D. Charles - One of the possible settlement leaders in part 2. An architect who kept his job despite everything. as the man who built the whole VIEW settlement with his bare hands, he's better with buildings than with sentient beings. Risks aversion works well with buildings, but it's far more complicated with people.

E. Eagle Eyes - Rick's wild card enforcer. he have many self-glorification stories. For example, he always boasts about being one of the few survivors of the initial outbreak in Neimerhold. He respect Rick for being a tough and decisive man, but will take the law to his feathery hands whenever it suits him.

3. In my reboot, Alan won't spend his plane time on sleeping at all. He'll talk with Tembo about dinosaurs and common sense. Billy's narrow-eyed looks toward Tembo will foreshadow his real nature. Also, I want Amanda to die for her sin of stupidity, just like Paul. We can get Amanda killed only if we take a great female character to take her place. Do you see the new girl as a defector from the villains group, or more like changing the black likable guy to a girl?

4. Along side with Heather, here are the other major changes in my TLW reboot:

A. Bastille Nickson - Instead of a male photographer who was sent by Hammond to sabotage Ludlow's efforts to bring dinosaurs to the continent, my version will have a female criminal who was bailed by Hammond in exchange for executing his redemption. If you're familiar with RWBY, I can say that Bastille will be very much like what I want Raven Branwen to be. She will do horrible things out of noble intentions (releasing the dinosaurs inside the camp, emptying Tembo's rifle from live bullets and so on), but unlike Nick, Bastille will redeem herself at her final moments. The heroes group will get to the abandoned worker village, chased by the raptors, and most of the raptors will take a step back. Except for the obsessed raptor who got killed by Kelly, the others will take a step back because of the same giant chameleons from the novel. Sarah will figure out that there's something in the worker village that scares even the raptors. After Sarah will figure out that their enemy is invisible, Bastille will take out a flare and throw it. The chameleons' outlines will be shown for a brief moment. Bastille will order the others to run away and get help while she fights the chameleons. The creatures will chase the flare long enough for the others to get away and get help. The remaining heroes will get to an abandoned radio station and try to communicate with the outside world. The scene will end with one of the chameleons limping out of the building, looking at the corpses of his mate and Bastille with one eye, and looking at the horizon thinking about revenge with the other.

B. The chameleon carnotaurs - Just like in the novel, they'll live at the abandoned working village. After Bastille will kill one of them, the remaining one will track down the others. I'm thinking about putting more chameleon carnotaurs in part 3, playing a creature that even Spino-Rex isn't hasty about messing with.

C. Sarah - The canon Sarah was great and tough on her own right, but her reboot version will have more traits of her novel counterpart, namely fighting Heather without any help.

D. The surviving InGen hunters - After most of them will be killed by the raptors and Mama-Rex, the remaining few will gather around Heather, who will use them to kill the heroes group before they all leave the island. Unfortunately for the hunters, they'll meet the heroes, the remaining chameleon and Tembo who came to avenge Ajay.

What do you say? And do you agree with that statement that if more people would notice the fact Ludlow dehumanized Malcolm, they would be less underestimating?