Thread:JoxFox2109/@comment-4708882-20190306105752/@comment-29414935-20190606190445

Also I ask you for an advice. I told you about this spin-off story, from a great main story with anthropomorphic animals from me and a good friend. Because we worked together, we did a great job there, not to sound arrogant, I'm just proud of us. So I didn't know if you remember that story that good, and you could search it in the other topics if you want, but it takes time and isn't necessary. So, for me it's not very hard to kill of villains or minor heroes, but if it comes to the main protagonists or important heroes, we know very well and like a lot, it gets really hard and I don't risk that too often, and so don't do that often. And one thing I really rarely do, is taking away the heroes love interest, because in my opinion that's one of the saddest things, in fiction and real life. And that feeling is in both, my own stories and existing movies. I mean I cried a lot in Avengers Endgame and (spoilers) cried when Gwen Stacy died in Amazing Spider-Man 2, to be honest. So like I mentioned again on top, in the spin-off story the husky lady is going to die. Like I said I rarely do that and she was one of my and my friends favourite characters in this story, the reason with me is that she is ver similar too the wolf lady like I said, and I do really like too, honestly my favourite character of mine. I like tuff and badass lady characters. So, the idea of the character came from my friend and I designed her (it's always the case and we are a good team, even if it is silent right know). He said to me like "Pls don't let her die, I really like her", and that was before I decided to do it. So I didn't do it to provoke him or anything, it was because a plot point. I think her death is neceassary and fitting in the plot and I tell you why. The anti-heroic protagonist at one point killed the son of an detective and from that on, the detective wants to hunt him down and take revenge. The protagonist is very cold and emotionless, but still got morals like killing no children or torturing, but he would do any assisination for money. At one point the detective have a conversation with him and says something like "You didn't even know what is like to love something, to lost something you care about, because you didn't have a heart! Someday you will feel what it's like to lose something you really love.". And then, he starts developing emotions for the husky lady and the two fell in love, and it's one of my most unique love pars ever. Then they want to seddle down after the mission and have children. But then, she is shot by the main villain and dies. And now he knows what it feels to lose something you love and care about, and for weeks he is in deep depression and don't can do anything anymore. Until he adopts a orphan boy and wants to raise him in wish for his deceased girlfriend. And it let me feel very sad and shocked, even if I'm the one who wrote it and could change it. I think that's a good sign and I hope the people feel that way too, even if they are anti-heroes. But both are presented more and more sympathic even if the protagonist got more sympathic later in the story and developes, and is not really likeable at the beginning. But I don't know if I should use that. I also doesn't want to change that because it seems perfect and fitting. But because it's so sad that these two never could be together again and their dreams are destroyed. So I developed the idea last year (a little bit after I had that idea of her death last year), that she returns somehow in the sequel and first thought she would be revived. But that isn't fitting and out of place for the story. Now I thought it would better if she and the son of the detective revealed to be alive and all have a happy end, but that first wouldn't be really realistic, second would might destroy the purpose and meaning of their deaths and third, even if this is in the main story, there are many characters (like five) who also are assumed to be dead but later are revealed to have survived, so that would let the audience think that nobody really dies in that story, they might would think that even at that point. Not to mention that the raven guy comes back in the sequel and is one of the five who was assumed dead but revealed to be still alive. So what do you mean? What is your opinion on that and what would you do if you were me?