Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20181201153231/@comment-29414935-20181216163139

He not only "targeted his twin". Like I said, he don't care about his "tragedy" and loves to hurt and torture innocent people. No excuse if you ask me. He even mentally tortures a child and tries to kill it.

But like you said, if they stand out from each other it can work. Sure, ecspecially this story has a high heinous standard but so did Dragon Ball and Marvel have for example. And like I said, I think they stand out from each other, but have similar goals. It finally depends on how I will make it if it's done, like you said.

But it's the the scientist hates his own "family" who cared for him, would kill his own mentor who was like a father, enslaved other geniuses to work for him and later kill them and tries to wipe out as much as he can and killed an entire city on earth. The demon did succed in multiple genocides and killed nearly all sorcerers in the universe being very dangerous, tortures all kind of beings for fun, threatening to kill the niece of the protagonist and has a very sadistic and dark humor. The grandmother wants to wipe out the whole universe, feeding on children's youth to become immortal and also killing her own daughter with no remorse, lying to her whole family.

For me, it sounds they already stand out from each other enough. The only problem could be with the tier system, that one is worse than the other.