Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190923113331/@comment-29414935-20191031141628

Now I have "finished" my story (the end) that is more darker and emotional. I now really know what happens to Jerome, the uncle of the protagonist. So he destroyed the life of multiple people and mostly also killed them, so the people he psychological and physically harmed the most, are his own daughter and his nephew. So I thought, which one deserved to kill him the most? So I thought of, that one of them is injuring him deadly and the other one gives him the mercy bullet. So both would get their deserved revenge. So I decided the daughter is finish him off, because it would come more unexpected than with the nephew who already killed multiple people and said "I will kill Jerome, because he ruined our lifes!" and she was first against it. So he is stabbed and punched by the nephew in a brutal fight, where he has a mental breakdown and wants to kill both of them and is then shot multiple times in the heart by his daughter. Before she kills him, he want to manipulate her as always and says "Ah Wendy! My lovely daughter! I knew you would...." and then before he can finish his sentence he is shot and interrupted by her and she answers "Enough from your shit talk!". So I wonder, that wouldn't be a redeeming quality for him, because it's obviously faked empathy, right? But I thought about, what if he would sometimes be apologizing for hitting his daughter but later does it again anyways? Or I have one scene where his mother confronts him and wants to sympathize with him and he has an surprised and thinkful face, but later is outraged when his mother attacks him. And what if he whine in the scene where he is injured?