Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20180905160147/@comment-29414935-20180916093251

I'm really confused with my villains from my zombie story, and I hope you can help. I write all of them here, even the ones I deleted because I self don't know if they count, but maybe you have a different view and opinion.

1. The first villain of the entire story, who started all. A chirug who spread the deadly zombie virus and thus killing an entire town of people. Later he horribly tortures the brother of the protagonist and turns him into a mindless killing machine.

2. A villain from the first part who wants revenge on the hero because he lost his legs because of him. He also brainwashed a friend of the hero and tries to spread the virus over the entire world with a satelite. (I deleted him)

3. A really "Joker like" doctor who eliminate an entire city with the virus. He also kidnaps the girlfriend of the protagonist and slowly turns her into a zombie. Later he also get the hero, tortures him and giving him drugs.

4. The brother of the third one. He spread the virus over all New York. (I delete him because he don't have very other motivations for what he's doing)

5. The son of the third one. He is a ruthless gangster and doesn't like his father. It's said that he raped and killed serveal children and womans. (I deleted him)

6. Also a scientist in another universe of the story. It's very hard to tell. It's a different timeline. He's very like the first villain. (I don't deleted him because it's another timeline, so the other characters don't exist)

7. A human who turns self a monster. He tried to spread the virus all over the whole world, and kindly succed in it.

8. A traitor who was the boss of the protagonist. It is later revealed that he tortures and killed many family members of the protagonist to really harm his feelings so he can't do something any longer. He also was kinda the guy who "take the strings" behind all the villains acts.

9. A ghost of a satanistic woman, who kills and manipulates children. She breaks the minds of the people they saw her.

10. The dark doppelganger of the hero. He tried to wipe out the whole universe.