Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20180905160147/@comment-29414935-20180914203330

I have a problem with one villain, which I didn't know I should delete or not. I try to explain it simple and short. Also: One villain who starts as a bully and then become a criminal, she worked with another teenager who also become a gruesome criminal, he steals, tortures (a little bit), has a tragic backstory and kills people. She does also steal and tortures the love interest of the hero very horrible and blackmails him to kill her. This is the Pure Evil one I don't know really stand out much from the others and does enough. The second one is a former teacher who murder people who stand in his way to create a bomb to destroy the entire city. And the thrid one is a immortal criminal who kills a lot people (self and with terror attacks), blackmailed people, tortures them horrible and rapes innocents. So what did you think?