Thread:B1bl1kal/@comment-24618333-20170220003930/@comment-24618333-20170302111219

I got a what-if? question which may help me improving some ideas for future chapters of my fanfic.

''There was a young sorceress named Lotte who known to have immense powers of eldritch origin similar with Tlob in my fanfic series. One day, she was nearly killed after a brutal confrontation with a malevolent graverobber who once tried to kill her when she was toddler, but when the graverobber goes to deliver a final blow to her, her boyfriend Will, a regular sorcerer-in training, intervenes and managed to brought her to hospital. Knows that either her and Will were in great danger as the said graverobber was part of organization that dedicated themselves to wipe out sorcerers, Lotte transferred some of her powers to Will which would help him to deal the graverobber and his thralls. At first, Will found that eldritch powers that his girlfriend gave to him was cool, until one day, when he used that power against the graverobber in their next confrontation, something horrific happened: When the said graverobber injured Lotte again, Will suddenly blacked out before transformed into a hideous berserker beast that brutally beat graverobber in retaliation. To make matter worse, after severely injured the graverobber that the villain forced to retreat, the transformed Will continues his rampage until Lotte managed to reach him. From there, it was apparent that due to eldritch powers that Will gained from Lotte still connected to her, everytime Lotte is in distressed or in pain, her transferred power in''side Will would take over Will's mind and he cannot fought back its influence.

Do you think some elements of this story can become an inspiration for my fanfic series?