Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-31330278-20190930215407

1. Changing Nick to Bastille will also change some of the other characters' personalities. The first character to change will be Dieter Stark. While being the same lowlife who's willing to hit another human being (not kill him. Just mauling him and keep him submitted) for preserving his right to abuse dinosaurs, this time he'll be homicidal, as seen in this version of Dieter and Bastille's confrontation:

Dieter: "If you love animals so much, then go to them and be an animal!".

Bastille: "your mother must be very proud of you, as you're far superior than animals. At least that's what she keeps telling herself".

Dieter: "you better jump from the cliff right now, you psychopathic environmentalist bitch!.

Bastille: "or what? The great white animal abuser will show his non-exist manhood?".

And then come the part where Dieter takes a cattle prod and shout "you're pushing you luck, sister!".

The real scary part is that Heather will secretly be on Dieter's side, and scold him for being an idiot vs for his behavior. "We'll kill her when Tembo won't look, not in front of everybody. Think of her as the baby t-rex, and do what i did when i stepped on his leg. Do it wisely". Heather's hostility toward Sarah will be out of inferiority issues, being upset that people whom respect and obedience are important to her (Tembo and Hammond) are liking Sarah better. Losing Tembo's respect and obedience will be her only regret, and she'll blame it on Sarah. The brainwashed few surviving Ingen hunters will show that Heather is not just a cruel woman with psychopathic tendencies, but also a female misogynist. Tembo will define her as "the only woman I don't respect", feel more committed to help the heroes group against the men whom he no longer leads, and later become a character in JP3 reboot.

2. Shakespeare is overrated, at least compared to the good people who wrote Kain, but having theatrical qualities is always a good trait for a fictional character. From the sound of him being a sophisticated person who take down a god, he's quite awesome. But what was his intended fate? And in regard to him as replacement judge for pride, did you meant he'll vote down Sofia for the reasons mentioned above? Good thinking :-).

3. I actually pictured Thomas as more similar to Ramsay, or to Karl Tanner, but being similar to Joffrey can work with proper planning, especially if you designed him similar to uncle James. I know it's not your direction, but "Eragon" did an interesting way to let the villain experience what he puts through everyone else. Galbatorix got an empathy spell casted on him, and he was forced to feel what his victims felt. If not in "Dark Seraphs", you can use it in "Xylus", or other future stories. An empathy spell/substance can be casted on Sergio, or maybe motivate Aaron to see the errors of his family. In Sergio's option, the forced effective empathy will be less of the redeeming type and more of the agonizing type/the way Isaac Wescott hurts people he cares about him because he likes to hurt himself. The redeeming type can work with Aaron.

4A. Recently I watched "The Last Castle", with Robert Redford and James Gandolfini, and the big bad is like a worse version of Rumkowski. His name, Colonel Winter, reflects his block of dry ice he have instead of a heart. Winter is a jail commandant, who turned his jail into his ministate, and see anyone who see the prisoners as human beings (namely Eugene Irwin, AKA Robert Redford's protagonist character) as a threat. With Irwin, his paranoia was actually not completely wrong, because Irwin used to be a general. Irwin was horrified of Winter's methods of keeping his frozen throne and led a prison rebellion. He succeeded, but Winter made sure he'll die for it. The ironic part about shooting Irwin to death was that Winter's final victory was his downfall. People could reluctantly swallow his atrocities as long as he was technically keeping the rules, but shooting Irwin while he was hanging the American flag was the last straw for everyone involved. Winter could've get away with everything and stay the commandant, if only he kept his mouth shut and didn't pulled out the gun. Winter is a great villain, who's planned to be added to this wiki, but he also made me sad. I really hoped he'll be missing in goodness. I was sure he's missing in goodness for the first half of the movie. Except his not so subtle smirk while trying to crush the first prison rebellion was an ultraviolet flag :-(. Irwin's death is like Caesar's death, which is part of why Irwin is a well-written hero. Robert Redford's performance makes me consider him as a candidate for General Tiger.

4B. Why was she deleted? And more interesting IMO, who should I talk with before creating her article again?

5A. In case Snow will be murdered by Bluebeard, do you see her being murdered by Amadeus himself, or by Fox and Cat? Fox and Cat had already killed highly skilled people in a 2vs1.5 match, both under their Bluebeard masks and without any mask (before killing Stromboli together, their kills in PL3 were without masks). In case Richard will be murdered, he'll be killed by Amadeus. Think of Masterface killing Cotton, but more intense.

5B. While I might never watch the new "Charlie's Angels" with Kristen Stewart (the truth must be said. No one can play better angels than Cameron Diaz, Lucy Liu, and especially no better than Drew Barrymore), I really like their new theme song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=70B4kGLdk0s

Hope Kristen's angel will be more like Dylan than like most of her roles. But if we assume Kristen truly became a better person and will actually act instead of her Val Kilmer syndrome, do you see her as a good candidate for Heather Ludlow? And what do you think Naomi Scott, AKA the live-action Jasmine and one of the new angels, as a candidate for Sarah Harding?

5C. Just finished episode 3. Alexander and Jessica's initial rivalry is creative, but confusing. People who're so similar and having mutual demon friends should like each other better. Jester's comment about Alexander's slightly inflated ego was on the spot. He seems to be pissed-off about mortals talking high about themselves. Corvus' relative pragmatism is another reason you might want to consider using in a possible post-DS story in the same universe. I picture Professor Bodner as a younger version of James Gandolfini, including having a higher-pitched voice whenever he's scolding somebody. The subject changing from Alexander and Jessica's school to the witch doctor is kinda confusing. In the sentence "some where completely normal looking", you should've write were. The little grammar error aside, I liked the scene where Jester and Corvus trashed the zombies and the golem :-). Cool touch with writing the witch doctor as a lich. He have shades of Dr. Facilier. Is that intentional? "I refuse to bow before a hypocritical prick" is my exact feelings toward the non-exist god of the real world. His talking about the upcoming chaotic reality were meant to allude to your own user name, or to Jester's post-Mattius Longstreet identity? People like Zuriel should get their ego whooped more often. Will be there good angels in your story? Hearing Gilgamesh and Jester respected each other makes the scene where Gilgamesh kill Jester more impactful, so wow :-). But why does returning Gilgamesh's fallen friend is necromancy? It's like when Cornelius blamed Edward and Alphonse at necromancy for trying their reviving their dead mother.