Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-4708882-20181031113946

Awesome chapter and I got a couple fixes if you don't mind: "Even the judge was struck by the sheer inhumanity of what Kieran inflicted to people" should be "Even the judge was shockwd by the sheer inhumanity of what Kieran inflicted to people", "Do as a favor and get the hell out of our sight until you'll learn to behave yourself! If you'll ever raise your hands on Noah again, i'll break more than just something you like" should be "Do us a favor and get the hell out of our sight until you'll learn to behave yourself! If you'll ever raise your hands to Noah again, I'll break more than just something you like", a couple sing "I"'s are lower cased and a few "don't" aren't missing the "'". Again loved the episode and they are minor things just felt you might want to know.