Thread:Loudfan21000/@comment-24200891-20171028122527/@comment-24200891-20171108081004

BVS failed because the plot was messy and lacked focus, also many dialogues were childish and scenes were predictible cliches. I have fears for JL, Zach Snyder directed big part of the film, but then another director took it over, so the plot will probably be messy.

Before my ban I was writing a fanfic focused on Carlino Casagrande. He wanted to become famous thanks to street dancing. Then he tried to make video of his dance and upload it in internet. However Carlitos came uninvited and mimiced his dance. Audience paid more attention to the baby than to the boy. This made Carlino jealous. I had an idea for more development of the story, but I was banned and I could never finish it. Ronnie offered Carlino skateboarding to feel better, so she showed him few tricks. Carlino did some of his own tricks, other skateboarders liked it. I don't know if I remake this story in DArt.