User blog:Jayden Jean-Baptiste/Annabelle the Doll

I really think Annabelle's page needs some serious work. Her page is a mess. Normally, I'd edit it a bit but I don't think that would change much.

The first few lines claim the page is based after The Conjuring version of the character, but instead, nearly the entire article focuses on the original story of the character. Only a bit of info is given about the film version of the character. It's rather confusing to be essentially talking about two different versions of a character- one real-life, and the other a fictional version of the former. Another obvious issue is that Annabelle's film already came out, and yet no info has been added to it.

Also, the series of galleries and video sections for the character makes things look very cluttered.

In order to fix this, I have two potential suggestions - either make two separate pages for Annabelle (one the real-life doll, and the other the fictional incarnation) or simply edit out the talk about the real-life doll. Personally, I'd rather go with the first pick.

Thoughts?