Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20170530021846/@comment-31330278-20170828175048

1. Just added link to those psychos, so you can understand what's the deal about them. With a little more serious approach, and of course without mice (i'm the director of transformer if i ever choose a rodent as a protagonist in my stories. Rabbits are not rodents, so with them it's another deal), those two (mostly McLeach) could be nice. I can totaly see Mcleach kill at least 4 people, and then blow his soldier's head with a shotgun for framing her as the sole killer, or just because he want all of the money to himself. Same goes for Medusa, as in one point she was about to shoot both her soldier and the child she kidnapped.

2. Example to how an animal out of animal story should be written IMO 1: As said, the secondary antagonist in my sequel to the police drama legend might be Jones the Cat, who help Old McDonald because he hope to become rich after he and his master will win the trial. Jones is noting like the cats we used to see in cartoons when we were young, but more like Mickey Altieri in a cat.

3. Example to how an animal out of animal story should be written IMO 2: The fox and the cat in "Pinocchio". Those two might be the villains in the possible 3rd part of my police drama legend, because they have what it takes to be serial killers. In a normal story, they'll kill Pinocchio and frame the pupet-master. Only the combined effort of Mulan, Quazimodo and the blue fairy will bring them down.