Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20170530021846/@comment-4708882-20170822004219

Just got done and damn Greenface is even crueler than I suspected with cutting of the genitalia. That said I loved the line: "you forgot the first rule of marriage: Angry wife, happy knife". The only recommendation might to be a quick review to make sure all the names and beginning of the sentences. And that's just a minor thing I noticed but really fun story. It was fun to see you give the times at parts and Sidney giving rules to surviving. Good job my friend. :)