Thread:Cronus 300/@comment-22439-20150420150429/@comment-4708882-20151113160944

It looks great so far on organization and I can wait till you write more on her overall character. In the personality section I just recommend pointing out what she plans to do with the crystals and why she want to meet the supreme being inside. When you give more on the power section just mention a weakness or its limit. Those are really the only suggestions I can think of. I'm excited to see when it gets expanded some and I love how she might look. :)