Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-5959298-20171215193957/@comment-4708882-20180601183030

Not bad, I'd take out "He is somehow prejudice towards them. When he is suggested to take at least children up, he immediately assumes that they would be followed by a pack of screaming mothers." Since you follow it up with pointing out he's racist along with that being more just not willing to compromise than prejudice. Also in the first sentence replace "doesn't" with "isn't", the only correction would be in "despite Sixth Officer Moody reminds him to let them out eventually." changing "reminds" to "reminding".