Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-25008763-20180212191146/@comment-25008763-20180212192314

the songs are fairly generic and just a start really.. I just wonder if the protagonist and antagonist work as concepts.. I'm trying to avoid as many stereotyping as I can, within reason for making a story.. which means I need to check quite a bit, too easy for writers to think they are making a "great" story and actually be making something wrong.. that's why I find wikis useful, sometimes, for some feedback.