Thread:ScaryMovie53/@comment-4708882-20171002235215/@comment-31330278-20171226231828

1. Good move with the "thank you kill". I do not envy that guy. Just for clarification: Does the gravity well is something like the well in "300 spartans"?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QkWS9PiXekE

Minute 2:50.

2. Xylus sound like someone who's gonna go through some major character development. Good call with doing him an alchemist from a dying breed. And take of body switching satan is as creative as ever. You can use Baby from DBGT or Mephisto as insperation. Same goes for the demons. I think, in a way, all of the demons are parasite life forms. Well done for showing it in a litteral way. Most people would've never think of that :-). Does fighting the satan of his world mean you plan Xylus to be an unwilling messiah? Also, does the orks in that story are like green humans (like the orks in some of my stories), or like an anime variant of supernatural creatures?

3.  Richard sound interesting. Reminds me of Emil. You got me curious about him and his ability to use claymores and talk with animals. I hope Abigail will become better as the story goes on. She sound like Elaine Benes:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elaine_Benes

Sergio and Aaron are great villains from what i see. Especially Sergio. If you're planning a second part, Sergio can make a great main antagonist. Like his father, but more sophisticated. Sergio and Aaron reminds me of Sirrus and Achenar from "myst". Sirrus is the cunning evil brother and Achenar is the impulsive axe-crazy one:

http://dni.wikia.com/wiki/Sirrus_and_Achenar

4. If it's McDonald, i see him slash the hay pig's troat in the middle of the night. The other 2 pigs see their brother is missing and go looking for him. When they find the body, McDonald shoot them. Since the brick pig is the strongest of the brothers, he goes head to head with McDonald and give his last remaning brother time to escape. Brick pig almost kill McDonald, but the shotgun give the old man the advantage, and he shoot the pig twice. The last remaning brother can be killed by either Jones or McDonald.

5. What's good about the common bully is that you teach them once and they remember the lesson forever. If only it worked on autuority figures and some horrible people i met. With the real-life Jill i met, it didnt worked. I stood tall and it made her angry. My brother couldn't stand to see me not cowering before him. Charlize Bridger, as you know, have shades of people who raise pet losers. As soon as she realized i won't tolerate her bad treatment, she went nuts. Why can't people with personality disorders be as simple as the common bullies we used to meet at school?

6. He'll get his karma. Big time. In a shape of Angel mother, who came back as a t-rex and gave him the bite of a lifetime. Rodrick will either get eaten by Angel's mother or get trampled to death by Zephir the lambert. I recall you prefered him to be eaten by the t-rex.

7. Scream Noir 2's episode 1 is out:

http://scream.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:ScaryMovie53/Scream_Noir_2#Chapter_1:_The_blue-eyed_monster_2