Thread:XxSkilletSaviorxX/@comment-24200891-20180822063606/@comment-24200891-20180910035634

I wrote almost 2/3 or maybe even 3/4 of Twin Birth. I need a help with 1 small scene. I try to construct dialogue between Lynn and Lincoln that she's upset that he didn't invite her to play with the twins. I tried to make it funny, but I don't even know how to make it interesting. What would you suggest?