Thread:ScaryMovie53/@comment-4708882-20171002235215/@comment-31330278-20171007002907

1. It's a good thing she have Jester on her side. Nice irony of having a demon as a humanity reminder pet :-) . I see Jessica's point and pain, but i have a hard time rooting someone who represent war. I mean, i can understand the character, but if it's either a warlord or the hero, i'll usually be with the latter. You did a good job at making her complicated. I'm not sure about the other 3 horsemen, so i'll assume Jessica is the ok of her category.

2. Compare to someone who have a hard time write a nice character, you were actually not half bad :-). You will be better in this as the time will go by. In a good way. Curvos have a valid point about hating the self-righteous humans and angels. I feel exactly the same way about many othority people and teachers i've met. Also, it was quite original to make Icarus into an anti hero (anti hero or anti villain? where did you aim the demons?). If it was me, Icarus would have ended as a soft version of Mephisto. I should consult with you more :-). It's always good to hear about a formely suicidal person (i met people like these in real life) who regain hope, as slim as it will be.

3. I think our king writter might like your line of thinking with Jester and Corvus. Dont worry about making characters who go mal-adjusting to reality for minorities. Even the author of "50 shades of grey" wouldnt do it, so you're safe. Judging from your vision, i do believe your 2 protagonists will redeem their past criminal self, or at least become better demon (i want to say people, but neither Jester or Corvus will like this comparison).

4. Here's my new idea: A child celebrate his 8th birthday with his favorite fairytale characters. Suddenly, the lights are out. When the lights are back on, 2 legend folks (Goldilocks as an homage to Casey Becker and another person) are found dead and horribly mutilated. Not the common and always effective gutting. One of the opening victims will be hanged from a hook your see mostly in slaughter houses, where they hang the meat for freezing. A hole in the kid's shoulder indicate he was the prime target. The kid and his new found mentor (most likely Robin Hood at this point) need to solve the mystery before the mystery will solve them. Should i make it a story of its own, or putting it in the 3rd part of my police legend, where the kid is pinocchio and our cops work with Robin Hood and the blu fairy to catch the killers?

5. You will like this movie. Maybe even love him. Gabriel was nuts because she was emotionless, as the old phrase "god can't bleed". Lucifer was, if i recall, one of the over-the-top-in-a-good-way kind of characters. And Gabriel's idea of bringing Lucifer deranged son to earth by forcing a woman into pregnant? Crazyness incarnated, which make Constantine and his Malcolm approach as the perfect foil. Dont worry about the "long" message. You have what to say and write your story with no less than an appriciation-worthy passion. Throw a rock from the window and you can hit 5 people who can take notes from your page.

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