Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20180905160147/@comment-29414935-20180915210541

I have five villains in a cartoonish galactic story where I think they are Pure Evil to, but with some I think there might be some issues...

I try to explain every of them and as much as I can. Most of them are flat typical villains.

1.The first is the main villain of the whole franchise. He is often very different from his plans and characteristics. He sometimes just try to take over a planet and sometimes he wants to destroy a entire planet. He also killed innocent people and some of his own mens. He have succeded with destroying some planets. But in some of the many parts, he decided to help the protagonist. But, in the last part he explain that he only helps because it helped him get rid of something and getting what he want. In the last part he want to destroy the entire universe just for the sake of it and finally killing the protagonist and everything he loves, he didn't care if he dies too or not.

2.The son of the first villain. He has a own galactic empire and a big laser with which he had destroyed many planets who don't want to be slaves of him. He later turns in a shaow being and wants to bring darkness all over the universe.

3.A scientist who take the role of the son after his presumed death. I think this villain is a little bit worse than the son. Because he also have a big laser with which he destroyed entire planets (a little bit more than the son) and is a nihilist who wants to destroy just everything in the entire universe so just he is the only person left. He also kills his own men if the do something wrong and would kill them all also if he fully would succed.

4.Another scientist and one of the henchmens of the first villain. He just started as the right-hand but later become a "own thing". One of his experiments results in him getting a very powerful being maybe even the most powerful being in the universe. He wants to destroy an entire planet system.

5.The dark version of the protagonist. So that's the hardest one to count I think, also because he's/it's mute. He is like a parasite who brainwashed and controll other people so he can do his plans. He have a similar plan to the second villain, to bring darkness all over the universe. He is like a virus who brings cancer and death to many beings in the universe. If he take over a person and then "leaves" them they will grusomely and slowly die.

I don't know if it helps that there a many more villains who are much less dangerous than them.

Remember that post from me? I have a question about it again. I have deleted the 4th and 5th villain because you said that from all 5 villains they are the less ones to count. But what if there are like I said, more smaller and harmless villain? Can they then count? Or isn't that enough because the end goal of them is too similar?

I will list you the villains from this story here who are more "harmless" than the other three.

1. An asteroid like alien. It just tries to kill the protagonist but failed.

2. A mysterious flying ghost hand with not very much personality. It also just tried to kill the protagonist and was later possed by his dark doubleganger.

3. A alien created by the son. It had also not very much personality and tried to kill the protagonist.

4. An alien who tried to kill the protagonist.

5. Another Alien who tried to kill the protagonist.

6. A snake like alien who is more of a amoral.

7. A lava alien. Tried to kill the protagonist.

8. A alien most of hands. Tried to kill the protagonist.

9. The master of the universe who later turned evil because of the parasite dark version of the protagonist. Tried to kill the protagonist.

10. A huge alien who lives in his own planet. Tried to kill the protagonist.

11. A alien with one big eye. Makes war against another fraction.

12. the right hand of no.11 and a fat ignorand alien. Tried to kill the protagonist.

13. the right hand of the doctor. He tortures and tried to kill the protagonist.

14. A robot version of the protagonist. More amoral.

15. A big hungry alien, who eats a lot and most spaceships, but also has no personality.

16. A general who is bainwashed and controlled by the main antagonist of the story.

17. A pervert alien who likes to kidnap womans. But also is mute and has not much personality.