Thread:Kooshmeister/@comment-12599421-20180130002106

Hey Kooshmeister,

I saw your Doctors of Doom script and I really like it. I have some ideas for it. You can use them if you want. Here they are:

1) Felina has a partner named Gray Taylor (like in the original draft) and the two of them are secretly lovers like Vincent Sobel and Dinah Drake from Arrow. Feral doesn't know about their relationship. The two are on patrol until they detect an alarm at MegaKat Biochemical Labs. They confront Dr. Street who steals a Super-Katalyst S66 for his "partner" Dr. Viper. Taylor gets bitten and converted into a bug-eyed Ci-Kat-A drone while Felina is rescued by T-Bone and Razor.  Felina becomes devastated at what happened to Taylor and Feral or T-Bone or someone comforts her over what happened.

2)  The MASA guards work for General Boggs (I really like that character by the way, he's pretty cool). Boggs has been trying to cure them for some time. Tbh, I don't think that the guards work for the Enforcers because their uniforms resemble the drawings you made of the Army members. Or you could introduce Captain Pomery who is sent by Boggs to check on how Belljar is progressing.

3) Lieutenant Steele appears and gets transformed into a Ci-Kat-A drone as well as Taylor.

What do you think?  