Thread:NerdWithAKeyboard/@comment-24374939-20170706144450/@comment-29644557-20170707010438

I like the idea, but its way too short and doesn't sound very offical or realistic. Uses of words like "totally" really suck you out of the illusion, and there are multiple grammatical and spelling issues. Also, why is it Keter? It sounds like a Safe or a Euclid to me.

Again, this critisizm is not me trying to be mean, but remember that the SCP site is BRUTAL when it comes to critiques and deletions.