Thread:JoxFox2109/@comment-4708882-20190306105752/@comment-29414935-20190424210211

So did you like it how I have it planned? I make a little summary.

First I talk about his heinous crimes. He created a drug which he sells on junkies for much money. The drug makes it "users" kill themselves on horrible ways and that's what he wants. He enjoys seeing people suffer and chaos. When a police officer finds his lair, he knocks him out. Then he tied him up naked on a table and painfully kills him, with the classical "putting a rat on his tummy and lock it under a bucket, and heat the bucket so the rat panics and gruesomely dig through the tummy". After the protagonist is near in defeating him, he kills his new girlfriend with a sniper when they both have a lovely dinner. She muffled gruesomely because he shot her in the neck. Then when he tries to escape, the protagonist crashes in his car so he can't reach the airport. Then enraged, he beats him up brutally and the villain doesn't really have a chance against him. He smashed his head multiple times in the windows of the car and beats him lying on the ground, which causes the back of his head to multiple times hit the metal ground, which causes him heavy brain injury. She then takes his pistole and first wants to shoot him, but then decides to let him suffer for the rest of his life in prison and with his heavy injuries, and knocks him out. But in the sequel he is rescued by another villain and offers him a job. He takes it and wants personally revenge on the protagonist. So he blackmailed him with a baby and knocks him out. He then ties him to a chair and put a C4-bomb to the babys seat and tries to kill both of them with it. However, the protagonist rescue himself and the baby and goes after him. The villain then holds a family hostage. So the protagonist has no other option and kicks him out the window from the 3rd floor. After he hits the ground, he survived but is fully paralyzed now. Then the boss finds him and puts him out of his misery, shooting him in the head, killing him for good.

Is it good like that, or should I change something?