Thread:Prime ShockWaveTX/@comment-3087036-20150429174058

Hello there. I'd like to ask regarding my edit on said article. I'd like to know why it was reverted, even though I only made basic changes to the first paragraph. The edit itself was an attempt to clean up what I believe were sentences that need fixing, for example:

Part of the first sentence "Isaac Westcott, is one of the primary antagonists of Date A Live franchise who was introduced as the main antagonist in Date A Live II, and later becomes the foremost antagonist in several Date A Live medias" which I decided to condense in my edit so it would be less wordy, because I think just saying he is one of the main antagonists of Date A Live pretty much sums up his role. It also saves the reader time to process the info, since repeating the same thing in the same paragraph tends to make it redundant. I believe it would be more appropriate to mention his role as the main antagonist (or "primary antagonist" if preferrable) once or only a few times in an article.

If you can explain to me your reason, I think it will help me better understand. Otherwise, I would like for my edit to be restored. Thank you for listening. 