Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190923113331/@comment-29414935-20191025201749

So if I understand correctly, if a villain's tragedy isn't an excuse for his/her actions, they will go more under Insecure rather than Tragic?

But I wonder if the Gangster Boss would be Tragic or Insecure, or both. Because I planned to let him explain his past a little bit more. He and his sister were poor street orphans with no parents and had a hard time to survive. He cared for his sister much because she was younger than him and he cared deeply for her. They were outcasted by many people. This let them both to become feared criminals and got money with illegal dealings. I'm also wondering if he would be Delusional, because I maybe plan a scene where he explains that he hadn't had the plan to kill her sister and it was the assassin alone who did it. He explains that he wanted the assassin to kidnap her and that she works for him as a stripper so she could work off the money she had stolen from him. Maybe also that he just killed the innocent woman which he stole from because not only that she tell on the police but also because her ancestors were a rich family which didn't gave out their weath to poor people like he and his sister was. I want to "humanize" him more, because that he has kinda an understandable motive and isn't just a flat generic crime lord and that the Wolf Lady maybe can forgive him. It also would be kind of a plot twist that he actually didn't want to kill her sister, but then the plot hole would be why he didn't tell her already in the first part. But not sure if he would fully redeem himself.