Thread:Looperreallyreallysucks/@comment-39213635-20190506222436/@comment-39213635-20190513210128

OK.

In a short spin-off of my fanfic, I would make a more graphic story: The main character is no hero nor sympathetic at all. He belongs to a teenager group who keep themselves good reputations while actually not only frame innocent people, bully kids, but also kill Poodle dogs and believe themselves to be superior, spitting on others, and want to be the richest people on the world. The group are based on some unlikable people I know on internet. Eventually, they all got to pay in gruesome manners: The one who bash others for having different opinions ended up being bashed and rejected, thus committed suicide. The one who fanatically bully people for "not love God" (which, in his mind, is the Chick Tracts one) ended up being drown in the river by an angry mob who angered by his lies. The one who kill Poodles often killed them by ran the trucks into them, thus as a result karma caught up to him as a truck gruesomely crashes his body alive. The last one, the main character, not only bashes different people, being a fanatic, killed and tortured animals, but is also a coward, and just like the other three, he would be willingly to sacrifice his "friends" to save his own skin. Ultimately, he was caught by the Illuminati, who actually orchestrated the first three teenagers' deaths, and he was killed in the most gruesome manner by being mutilated alive while his blood was made into the drink for the Illuminati members.

Really horror, isn't it?