Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20181201153231/@comment-29414935-20181219003021

Wow, that sounds very interesting and like a really big and good story. Also that you take all that time to explain everything about them to me in detail. It sounds like a dark story with a religious and gothic touch, because of the thing with heaven, hell, souls and afterlife. It's interesting how we both do so different kind of stories. I have heaven and hell also in a few stories but very rare, most of them are more realistic, with animals or magic, fantasy or sci-fi like. I would love it if we would work together on stories far in the future and that we really can make movies or series about it. I really wish that. Hopefully it isn't just a dream that can't be reach...

And btw I also have now a good conclusion on how it shows later that the uncle didn't care about his family anymore. He explain to his daughter that he was the cause that the protagonist/his nephew got psychotic and he is the reason all that happens and that his wife and son died. He wanted to kill his brother and family because of the hatred against them, also planning that Norm (the protagonist) kills his wife and son that were on the playground at the time. Saying that they were "A encumbrance for his life and his work he must going to do" only letting his daughter alive so he can do what he wants and using her intelligence. That would be so shocking and evil, right?

Also, did you planned to make your villains cruel and heartless (Pure Evil) or was it just "random"? The first villains I created who are cruel and heartless wasn't on purpose designed to be Pure Evil because I wanted them to be it, I didn't even know at that time what the Complete Monster/Pure Evil category was. But now I now it, I often designed villains to be Pure Evil, because I wanted them to be it. What is not really good if used to often or all the time.