Thread:Balthus Dire/@comment-24097388-20181111005025/@comment-24097388-20181111015931

There was actually a similar situation I had to deal with a few months back on an article here (the Ken Kaneki one) where I had to fix up on grammar, take out false information, update outdated information, etc. It was pretty frustrating, but the article came out nicely. It's just the Synopsis page which I still have to update. So I understand where you're going with this.

Anyways, I made a few changes here in the introductory in terms of grammar and structure, just to make it look a little more neat.