Thread:BeholderofStuff/@comment-31330278-20180617214919/@comment-24859393-20180617230922

Hi sorry it has been a while and I apologize for not giving feedback on your fan fics but I DID read them. Now, I haven't read the Lost World, but he doesn't sound any less heinous than Hoskins in JW. Targetting the hero and being deluded by science sounds standard for the series. But again I haven't read it so I recommend maybe asking some other users or proposing him on TV Tropes.