Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-35836648-20181008011308/@comment-4708882-20181104143016

Well in the main story I'm working on there aren't any heroes until the end and they barely win. The main flaw is the main character (Jester) due to his rage getting the better to where reckless enough to receive a fatal blow, in the other story I might work on the main villain just failed to realize a flaw with his possession requiring breaking the main character and the final one kind of had a death wish along with honor leading to his death. A few here and there are enough of a threat but are too arrogant to realize they could lose thus underestimate others.