Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190923113331

What made the crime lord boss stand out for you? Because I was sure you would say he doesn't do enough, and especially because myself was sceptical about him. My friend which I work with him together on this story, created this character and always said that he was like Pure Evil. But I didn't thought so and when I asked you the very first time, you also were sceptical. Mainly because of the thing that his henchmen want to be like him and are like him, but now I changed it to "they just want to be like him but aren't like him" and are scared of him. I think that's the main difference. I want to look back at how I wrote and explain the character to you, the first time. But I don't find our discussion anymore. I hope it wasn't deleted. Now I added a few more details to his crimes and villainy to make him "a bit more evil". Like I said, he took 50% of the city. The 50% citzen who live in his part of the city are scared of him and are repressed from him. It's chaos and destruction on this part, with no legal laws. If some people want to escape from that part of the city because they are afraid, they got killed by him and his men. Like I said, he tortures other gang members to find more information, he promise them to let them alive if they talk, but if they talk, he still is going to kill them neverless. He hangs their corpses on lanterns and writes death threats on their bodies for the other gangs. I also have a very unique death for him. He is going to be lured in a trap when he chases the protagonist (bounty hunter) on his motorcycle (the bounty hunter is on one too). The love interest and best friend of the bounty hunter are then tighten a wire across the speed and when they race through it, the crime lord boss is decapitated and his head lands in a puddle on the street. 