Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-4708882-20190727145757

1. It indeed is a bit sad when they throw away a chance at redemption though Joker made that clear in a lot of stories. In that sense he does remind me of General Tiger and Maureen. I don't remember a lot of Red Crusader unfortunately.

2. I don't recall if myth made it clear but probably revenge if the chance could happen. I could see Eurystheus having doubt but still doing it because upsetting a god/goddess generally was a death sentence or worse in myth. Myth's Thor could be fun but far less heroic than Marvel's take. I think Thor was a bit conflicted with Loki though at the end knew Loki needed a serious punishment.

3. I'm really happy you liked he prayer as he doesn't even realize Grace overheard it, which she actually compliments basically. Yeah I wrote Sir Thomas to be someone everyone can easily hate as a man that would rape any woman, knowingly kill his own daughter and aim to ruin his son's life just because he can. Jester even swallowed his pride (granted they insulted each other throughout their entire fight) asking Sir Thomas just spare Grace, going as far to say he could be torture or killed no problem. Sir Thomas basically says he'll kill her and "let him grieve" just to hurt him more, being this petty ultimately is what leads to his demise. Don't worry Douglas is definitely enough of a scumbag with what I have planned and it's not a moral for why he doesn't. For "God" you are right it's basically a way to call out the hypocrisy and abuse as while he doesn't actually rape in the story onscreen or really outright proven, Jester when he "acknowledged" Sir Thomas serves "God", pointed out he never said he didn't exist but was disgusted with him calling "God" basically the "God of Cowards and God of Rape". As you can guess it gets a bit darker than the first few episodes and Jester isn't afraid to call out anyone.

4. I definitely agree "Final Destination" was rather funny at times to where I couldn't take it super serious. I could see Tony Todd's character as a hero as Punisher would shot to kill him the moment he betrayed him.

5A. I definitely find him underrated especially given the writer wrote a song based off him and had one of her friends sing it. Really love the ideas and inspirations you've taken from. :) I think Dale killing Hook might work better and play a nod to their connection in the stories which both are based. Sidney Driscoll sounds cool and could make a decent story for why the villains are after him.

5B. I could see them reading it. Oh Varian definitely isn't completely in the right but definitely far more understandable than most villains and reasonable in having emotional issues. Varian blames Rapunzel in the shoe because she was his only chance so when she couldn't he came home to find out it was too late leading him to blame her and the kingdom in grief, sorry for the confusion but the idea for a partner killing his dad was just a thought of for if you chose to write a story with him. The show is ending next season but I feel there is a decent chance he will redeem in the end.

5C. I'd personally say yes to that being an artistic side to William Afton. On the vote anytime bro and I agree that kind of person could probably survive prison which is a bit creepy. Both betrayals are arguably as bad as one is self preservation though cruel given one was trying to make amends but the other was completely pointless. I might give it to Jill solely because she had no reason to do so.

5D. Given I haven't yet watched all the films or even a majority it's not something I can say with certainty either way, that said he came across pretty condescending at points to me.

PS: Read Scream Noir and liked it, maybe a few small grammar errors but overall I really did love it, great job bud! :)

In case lookin for the errors I saw:

7:30: "She get into her bed and almost get a few seconds of sleep, until she hear a message on her phone. A tired Judy open up the phone and see Maggie Duval's brutalized snuff picture, accompanied by a threatening recording in James Earl Jones' voice." should be "She gets into her bed and almost got a few seconds of sleep, until she hear a message on her phone. A tired Judy opens up the phone and see Maggie Duval's brutalized snuff picture, accompanied by a threatening recording in James Earl Jones' voice."

5:00: "Dewey shares a shy smile and say "we'll have to wait with the paradise on earth thing, but i do happy i found someone like you". should be "Dewey shares a shy smile and say "we'll have to wait with the paradise on earth thing, but I am happy I found someone like you".

Those were the only two I saw besides a few "I" or "I'll" needing to be capitalized. Overall awesome job just trying to help with the few I saw in my first reading bro. ;)