Thread:ScaryMovie53/@comment-4708882-20171002235215/@comment-4708882-20171227001707

1. Yeah his death I wanted to be painful so I have it somewhat similar: Shi of what I have pictured has the gravity of Kar increase in one spot to basically create a crater with it so strong he's rendered permanently immobile where he'll presumably be eventually crushed or die from malnutrition. Shi can be cruel but this a victim no one would feel bad for especially with how he threatens Violet (Shi's crush) in the end.

2. Glad you like Xylus so far and Toxocara. :) Yeah Xylus in a way is a messiah though most fear and hate him because Toxocara tricked people into hating alchemists and the mutant type people by leading them to believe they were heretics and devil worshipers. When Toxocara takes over their form takes a pale blue demonic form over time and he has to remain in the body for a time to regain the energy to leave. Xylus due to being unintentionally destructive earns the title "God of Destruction" much like Shi earns the title "Shinigami" (Death God / God of Death). Orcs are green humanoids in my story.

3. Richard is for the most part peaceful and his communication with animals gives him an advantage in most cases. He might not like communicating with people much but he definitely isn't too bad with most people. Abigail will have moments to show she can go over her head but she'll also show moments of kindness and respect. Her main reason is people tend to think she's not capable and due to being abused some by her grandfather when she was young (a villain who gets a fate worse than death). All them will be hands on but yeah Abigail might be a little like Elaine in being at times a jerk / arrogant.

Well it ends after the first part most likely though the Ryder clan does have basically a mini arc before meeting their end. Sergio I made the brains in most ways and a most sophisticated member and skilled in manipulation. Aaron definitely doesn't want to commit any serious crime and is insecure mostly just wanting his families approval. That said I like the comparison with Sergio's being pretty much spot on. :)

4. That sounds awesome and I could definitely see Jones getting the last brother maybe through tricking him into thinking he was safe. McDonald definitely deserves to at least get hurt minimum by the strongest brother for what an ass hat he is.

5. Yeah I have no idea why people can't learn the lesson after being called out. I guess some just refuse to accept not everyone can put up with their shit and that they have faults.

6. Definitely seems like a well deserved fate.

7. Awesome I'm going to try to read it sometime soon. :)