Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20171028122210/@comment-24200891-20171117055015

This scene with Zeke is gross and needless.

I corrected my pics of young Luan and Lori with baby Linky. Lori had 5 eyelashes instead of 6, she's also more in centre of the picture. Lincoln has more natural face when he hugs Luan. I didn't know pics can be replaces like on wikia.

2 upcoming eps Crying Dame and Anti-Social have weird plots in descriptions, I hope they are better.

Have you considered what are original sins of the Loud House? I think those sins are:
 * Lincoln being too much focus
 * The sisters didn't get equal focus
 * wasted introduction of Ronnie Anne, giving outdated and untrue stereotype that girl who bullies a boy has a crush on him (the creator should be more original instead of copying other creators)
 * continuity errors like Lisa going to kindergarten despite she's a teacher or Ronnie Anne not being Lincoln's classmate in all eps but Heavy Meddle and Shell Shock
 * inconsistent characterization of parents (once they are competent and once not, once good once neglectful)
 * too much toilet humor and mean-spiritness
 * double standard
 * lack of development and overuse of Clyde
 * overuse of bland Bobby and underuse of Ronnie Anne
 * Santiagos moving out before developing enough
 * Keeping status quo and rarely changing it

We'll talk later, I need to go to work.