Thread:Loudfan21000/@comment-24200891-20171028122527/@comment-32302692-20180207004222

Most of these writers are terriable at drama, well not terriable writing, but terriable pacing, by that I mean not giving it the right time to develope, and most feel very forced. In No Laughing Matter where Luan hears her family crititise her comedy, it's not enough for it to be sad with her mooping around. Okay look I get it that she can ignore critiicism from people she don't know, but from her family to criticise her is enough to make her sad, okay that's fine because that is a hard hit to take. But the family did not need to be the one at fault and make it their mistake for Luan for giving up comedy just because she can't take harsh crititicism. And the episode makes it feel like they are in the wrong for venting out their fustrations, which honestly you can't blame them since AFR and FP, now we are going to have another prank episode.

Whoop-be-freaking-do