Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-24758512-20150407150208

Hey bro, sorry to bother you but I want to ask your help. I need your help in Minerva Liddell entry in Tvtropes. She was recently approved to CM category, so I decided I would create her entry. I already have all the tropes that are referred to her, and gave my maximum to avoid any grammatical error (I may have left some). That's why I need help. Can please check for any grammatical error in her entry?

Again sorry to ask this for you

Here is her entry:


 * ZeroPercentApprovalRating: She was hated and disapproved for EVERY SINGLE ONE in this spin-off. Besides being the most hated character in the story, she was also the most feared.


 * AbsoluteXenophobe: She hates Japanese people and she doesn't hide it.


 * TheAce: She is by far the most powerful character that was introduced in the spin-off. However, this only happened when she has acquired full power by stealing one of the CR-units of Ashcroft series, she became so powerful that all the heroes had to fight together to defeat her.


 * AlwaysSecondBest: Minerva was considered the second most powerful wizard in the SSS when Artemisia was in the organization. She later passed Artemisia after had stolen the Lion unit and finally became the most powerful of the SSS.


 * AloneWithThePsycho: Cecil was unfortunately an victim of this moment. While Cecil watched Artemisia in a coma in a hospital, Minerva came also to see Artemisia. Until then everyone thought Minerva was concerned about Artemisia, however, the story was not that. Minerva almost cut off Cecil's arm with a laser sword without giving any warning. Minerva simply was about to cut off the arm out of her own partner in a public place with no one around.


 * AmbitionIsEvil: She is willing to do anything to get what she wants. No matter the price.


 * ArchEnemy: She formed this one with Artemisia when they dueled every day. She also created this Mikie (though she died before they fought again).


 * ArrogantKungFuGuy: Minerva is a professional in martial arts, and she underestimates everyone she faces with her combat skills.


 * AttackAttackAttack: Her fighting style. She also does not have a fighting style that can be "studied". Her attacks are so random that it is impossible to anticipate what she will do.


 * AttentionWhore: Her main goal is to receive attention of people.


 * AxCrazy: When she's not masturbating drunk with power or patrulling Tenguu City, she is sexually, physically and psychologically torturing her opponents ForTheEvulz.


 * BadassBack: The back of her Lion unit resemble to 4 large spider legs that appear iron wings.


 * BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: This is what Edgar thought Minerva was doing; doing his dirty work.


 * : She was only seen once carrying a laser sword in volume 3. She carried a huge  with just one hand.


 * BarehandedBladeBlock: Just her bare fist is sufficient to stop and break a sword as sharp as the .


 * BerserkButton: During the final battle, Minerva was confident of herself after she had been more powerful with Lion unit of the Ashcroft Series. However, when Mikie managed to find an opening to strike Minerva, she "really" lost her calm and happiness, and quickly went crazy and psychotic.


 * BiggerBad: Minerva began her introduction as a minor character that first appeared in a flashback. However, she has become the biggest threat throughout the spin-off after the scientist Edgar F. Carroll hired her to retrieve the Ashcroft Series units that were stolen by 3 SSS Wizards who were trying to save Artemisia of DEM's claws. Edgar was about to discover that evil is not toy, and that he would regret that he had condemned all the poor lives that were around him. Once she made her appearance in Volume 3, Minerva gradually slowly replaces Excuse Plot of the story. After she had stolen a CR-unitof the Ashcroft-Series, she simply betrayed Edgar after she achieved what she always wanted, and quickly became the true main antagonist of the spin-off.


 * BlondesAreEvil: She is the only blonde character in this spin-off.


 * BloodfromTheMouth / TearsOfBlood: During the final battle against Minerva, Mikie attacked Minerva numberless times before she falls disabled. Once Mikie finished her attacks, Minerva was completely bloodied while a large amount of blood was coming out from her eyes, nose and mouth.


 * BloodKnight: She makes no attempt at hiding how much she loves beating the shit out of her opponents.


 * BoobsOfSteel: She is the strongest woman and the character with largerst breasts in the spin-off.


 * BountyHunter: This is what Edgar thought she was. Edgar hired Minerva to do a dirty job offering a high reward to her.


 * TheBrute: Minerva's body is a normal body of an attractive woman. She does not have muscles and neither appears to be a brute but her fighting style is also nothing subtle or gentle. Her fighting style is based entirely on brute strength.


 * TheBully: She loves bullying her opponents after she defeated them. Before she kill her opponents, she humiliate them in every way possible.


 * CardCarryingVillain: She loves death, carnage, people's suffering, torture and any form of crime that can be committed, and she makes no effort to hide it.


 * ChildHater: If there is a trope that symbolize Minerva, this would certainly be the perfect trope for her.


 * CombatSadomasochist: This happens only when Minerva was insane. She was attacked and beaten numberless times, however, she was smiling insanely like she was enjoying it.


 * TheConspiracy: She conspired against Edgar from the time she was hired by him in order to use him to gain power, ego and revenge.


 * ConsummateLiar: She lied to everyone in the spin-off. Lies are, without doubt, one of her greatest weapons.


 * DarkActionGirl: She's cruel, cold, sadistic and vile. While reliant on her powers most of the time, she is quite tough and versed in hand-to-hand combat.


 * DeathByIrony / KarmicDeath: In her last moments, she said she would crush the skull of all heroines. Guess how she dies.


 * DeathGlare: This happened when Minerva was defeated for the first time by Wizards of the SSS and AST. When everyone thought was dead Minerva, Minerva gave a fatal attack in Cecil while everyone was off guard. When all looked back, they saw Minerva with a facial expression that represented "pure death".


 * DidntSeeThatComing: She thought she was invincible with the Lion unit and underestimated her opponents numerous times in the final battle. When was she injured by Mikie, everything went wrong on how she thought it would be.


 * DirtyCoward: Minerva was defeated several times in her own game. She was just a SoreLoser that always gave an excuse for her defeat in her own challenges. After so many defeats, Minerva gave a "low blow" to kill the friends of Artemisia for no reasons (she could not win in fight). The scar in her left eye is to show to everyone that she is an unfortunate coward.


 * TheDragon: The Dragon of SSS. She became the strongest of the SSS after Artemisia left the organization and joined to the DEM. Minerva took place as the Ace Wizard after Artemisia left, and finally ceased to be the second best.


 * TheDreaded: Everyone fears her. EVERYONE. That Origami gets along with her shocks many.


 * DrivenByEnvy: Most of the challenges she made to Artemisia was only for envy. Minerva was jealous of Artemisia because she was the most powerful, loved and respected Wizard in SSS. And that's what led Minerva to challenge Artemisia numerous in order to humiliate her in public.


 * TheDogBitesBack: In volume 4, delivered by Mikie Okamine as revenge for Artemisia's rape.


 * EvilBrit: Minerva came from England and she is English origin.


 * EvilCannotComprehendGood: Minerva gets enraged at Mikie when she tries to save Cecil O'Brien. She also makes it clear that she hates any of solidarity and harmony act.


 * EvilCounterpart: To Artemisia B. Ashcroft.


 * EvilerThanThou: There are 3 characters of the spin-off that are secondary characters, however, they are also recognized as the first antagonists of the spin-off. In the first two volumes, Ashley, Leonora and Cecil had the role of  main antagonists before their true role were revealed. Once Minerva made her appearance in Volume 3, all characters quickly realized that Minerva was, by far, the biggest threat. Her appearance made all the protagonists and secondary characters had to join forces to fight against her.


 * EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: For being one of Date A Live's darkerst and most serious villains, Minerva shows a bizarre sense of humor and twisted humor in raping, torturing, killing for fun.


 * EvilIsNotAToy: Edgar thought she was just a toy that would lead him to victory .... but he was wrong. Edgar felt it on his skin as his head rolled on the floor while Isaac Westcott insanely smile on his corpse.


 * EvilLaugh: Bar none the most glorious example in the spin-off.


 * EvilPlan: Kill Artemisia B. Ashcroft, Cecil O'Brien, Leonora Sears, Origami Tobiichi, Mikie Okamine and Ashley Sinclair to become the strongest Wizard of the SSS in order to be loved and respected by all employees of Deus.Ex.Machina Industries and Special Sorcery Service.


 * EvilWearsBlack: Wears a black combat suit.


 * : Of Melissa Dawn McCord.


 * EyeScream: In her retaliation against her, Mikie has managed to injure her when she was off-guard.


 * TheFaceless: Until Volume 3.


 * FalseFriend: She never cared for her partners.


 * FatalFlaw: Her bloated ego.


 * FauxAffablyEvil: When she's not insulting her enemies, she's usually mockingly complimenting/humoring them.


 * ForTheEvulz: Her goal is something logical that can be justified. However, what is completely unjustifiable are her "hobbies".


 * FourStarBadass: She's one of the highest ranking Europe Military Force, and can fight one-on-one with Adeptus.


 * GoodColorsEvilColors: Minerva wears two colors, white and black. Since white is a person who has a "crazy tone" and black represent a CardCarryingVillain, she is, without doubt, the two colors.


 * GoodScarsEvilScars: She has a huge scar on her left eye. She earned this scar to show how cowardly she is.


 * Greed: She is extremely obsessed about killing Artemisia for the scar she created the Minerva' s eye.


 * TheHedonist: Once Artemisia left the SSS, Minerva became the strongest and recognized in the SSS. However, she was not satisfied, and she wanted to kill Artemisia for revenge.


 * HotBlooded: She's loud, theatric, and eager to kill.


 * TheHyena: UpToEleven, she laughs or giggles every two or three minutes.


 * Hypocrite: She swore to the SSS that she would always serve the organization with loyalty and that she would punish any traitor, but in fact, she was all she would punish.


 * IGaveMyWord: She swore to the SSS that she would serve the organization honestly ....... would


 * IllKillYou: She said this several times after Mikie gave a attack on her body.


 * IrrationalHatred: Towards children, so much that she wants to kill all children who come in her way.


 * Jerkass:  Minerva "feeds" off suffering and pain of people, and she loves it. She does not care about anyone but herself, and she simply does all kinds of atrocities on people (be they defenseless or not) without reasons.


 * JerkWithAHeartOfJerk


 * JustBetweenYouAndMe:After Minerva had defeated all Wizards in the final battle, Mikie mentioned that the final fight would be between her and Minerva.


 * KickTheDog: She tries to kill Artemisia's best friends in front of her in order to torture her psychologically, forcing Artemisia act quite violently to save her friends. And as if that were not enough, she sexually abused children, threatened the SSS Wizards, betrayed Edgar after manipulated him, rapes Artemisia psychologically, tortures her own partners, stolen the Lion unit, abused Mikie and Ashley, broke the bones of Leonora, almost killed Cecil in front of all her friends and even caused the invocation of a monster called Ashcroft assembly that was about to kill millions of people in Tenguu city. Good job, Minerva!


 * KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: She does this accompanied with a KickTheDog. She knocks Mikie easily and crushes her skull with such brute force that the ground breaks. Even when Mikie was almost dead due to Minerva's brute strength, she still kicked her body several times.


 * KickTheMoralityPet: The Special Sorcery Service and Edgar F. Carroll.


 * KickTheSonOfABitch: People loved her HumiliationConga.


 * KneelBeforeZod: More like Kneel Before Minerva.


 * KnightOfCerebus: As soon as she appears in the spin-off (volume 3), the humour level disappears, the becomes story dark and horrifying. Once she made her appearance, the story was no longer a ecchi comedy.


 * KnightTemplar: This is how she sees herself.


 * LackOfEmpathy: Everyone thought Minerva still had a bit of empathy, but she rejects such concept.


 * LaughingMad: Jesus, she laugh every minute when she is in combat....


 * LeaderWannabe: She considers herself the leader of the SSS. However, she ceased to be a wannabe and eventually became the true leader of the SSS. But a simpler way to say, she turned the Ace Wizard while Artemisia was absent from the organization.


 * LiesToChildren: She told to Ashley that she would never hurt a partner. Ever....


 * LoveIsAWeakness: Minerva believes this. In the manga when Ashley express her feelings for Artemisia (not yuri), Minerva says these feelings are stupid.


 * LovesTheSoundOfScreaming:  Fitting her sadistic nature, she loves to hear her enemies scream in pain.


 * TheManBehindTheMan: More like: The Woman Behind the Man. Edgar thought he was using Minerva for his own benefit, but in fact, was Minerva who was using Edgar for her own benefit.


 * ManipulativeBitch: She manipulated Edgar from the moment she joined to his side. Once she stolen the Lion Unit and became the most powerful Wizard of the spin-off, she betrayed Edgar after achieving what she always wanted; power.


 * MeaningfulRename: Her real (former) name was "Alice Liddell." The reason of why she changed her name to "Minerva Liddell" is unknown.


 * MindRape: She literally mentally raped Artemisia after she stolen the Lion Cr-Unit. While she was drunk with power, she masturbated while she was sexually abusing Artemisia's memories.


 * MrFanservice:  She had her own fanservice moment at the end of Volume 3. This happened when she was in the shower, her body was completely naked. However, from the moment she tortured Artemisia's best friends, the readers did not want anything else but to see her dead.


 * MusclesAreMeaningless: Minerva doesn't have muscles, but she can SuperStrength break a person in half easily.


 * Narcissist: She considers herself the most powerful Wizard of SSS, saying that there is no Adeptus on DEM can defeat her.


 * NeverMyFault: One of Minerva's personality traits. She blames Artemisia for her atrocities that she did against to her own partners.


 * TheNicknamer: Artemisia is "Piece of Shit", Cecil O'Brien is "Dumbass Bitch", Ashley Sinclair is "Brat Shit".


 * NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Minerva offered to all readers and characters multiples Nightmare Fuels and multiples KickTheDog moments since her introduction.. She even gave to the readers a "special double Nightmare Fuel accompanied with a KickTheDog" in her last moments; murdering Cecil in front her friends and invoking a gigantic heartless monster created by science that would destroy the planet.


 * NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Kicks Mikie almost to death, simply because she made a small cut in her stomach.


 * NoSocialSkills: She sucks at it. The only time that Minerva tried to relate socially to someone, she cut the person's arm with a huge laser sword.


 * NoSongForTheWicked: Well, that is obvious, she comes from a Manga series.


 * NotBrainwashed: Most DEM Wizards were brainwashed. However, Minerva proved to everyone that she made all her atrocities by her own will.


 * NotGoodWithPeople: She wants to be admired by everyone around her but whenever someone approaches her, she pierces the person with a huge laser blade. You suck Minerva....


 * NothingCanStopUsNow: "I win!"


 * NotInThisForYourRevolution: She only joined with Edgar to get what she wants. Once got what she wanted, she betrayed Edgar. She never had intentions to help Edgar in his cause.


 * ObviouslyEvil: Has dark yellow eyes, a huge scar in her left eye]] and has a indelible slasher smile is enough to confirm that Minerva not a good girl, or much less a heroine....


 * OhCrap: In volume 4, she underestimated Mikie because she was a child. However, this "child" opened a huge gash in her stomach. Minerva was terrified at what she just saw; "a brat hurt the strongest woman of Earth".


 * OneHitKill: She just needed an attack to beat off Cecil!


 * OneManArmy: Simple Wizards are no match for Minerva; she breaks the bones of 5 overpowered Wizards that were using the strongest CR-units series already created in the history of humanity.


 * OverarchingVillain: Once she was introduced in Volume 3, she manipulated all the events of the last volumes of the spin-off, Volume 3 and 4.


 * TheParanoiac: When Artemisia made a scar in Minerva's left eye, she got extremely crazy and paranoid in killing Artemisia.


 * PlayingWithPuppets: She likes to beat and torture her opponents before killing them without mercy.


 * PsychoForHire: She was a crazy sociopath much before Edgar hires her. When Minerva was hired by Edgar, she used her position only to commit horrible atrocities.


 * PsychoticSmirk: There is no appearance of her character that she is not with a "big" grin on her face. Minerva is one of the few characters that challenges the famous Isaac Ray Peram Westcott psycho smirk.


 * ThePunishment: She said she would punish any traitor of the SSS.


 * RazorFloss: Her trademark weapon, stored in her gloves. She used this ability only when she wore the typical combat suit of SSS.


 * TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives it to Cecil while pointing out her FatalFlaw.


 * ResistanceIsFutile: She ordered Cecil, Ashley and Leonora to surrender without any resistance.


 * RivalTurnedEvil: Previously, she was just a SoreLoser who wanted attention and fame. She constantly challenged Artemisia to duels in order to defeat her and becomes the most powerful Wizard of the SSS. But all that changed when Minerva made a cowardly act in attack the 3 best friend of Artemisia;Ashley Sinclair, Leonora Sears and Cecil O'Brien.


 * Sadist: Oh, dear...She is, without doubt, the best example throughout the series!


 * ScarsAreForever: She has a huge scar on her left eye.


 * ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: She tends to instill fear in her enemies by stating her position as DEM Wizard.


 * ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: Minerva uses her position to commit terrible atrocities on people, be they combatant or not. Once Artemisia left the SSS, Minerva used her position as the Ace Wizard of SSS to create her own rules about how other Wizards would work.


 * SerialRapist: She mentions in volume 4 she used her authority to rape children. And still blamed Ashley, Leonora, Artemisia and Cecil for her own actions.


 * SlasherSmile: She gave an incredibly scary while she crushed Mikie's head!


 * SmugSmiler: The New World's Strongest Woman takes to showing an insufferably superior expression when no one but the audience is looking.


 * SpoiledBrat: After she lost so many duels, she made a cowardly act in attacking Artemisia's best friends just because she is a SoreLoser.


 * TheStarscream: Once she was hired by Edgar, she swore to him that she would kill the rebels of SSS and recover his experiments back. That's what everyone thought... but who knows what she really had in mind...


 * SuperSoldier: She was already a super soldier when she was just a SSS Wizard. When she stolen the Lion unit, she has became the new World's Strongest Woman. Ellen was doomed.


 * TheSocialDarwinist: She believes that weak people as children are just a burden, and must be wiped out in a very painful way.


 * TheSociopath: People are just her stress toys, and she likes beating and humiliating those stress toys a lot.


 * SociopathicSoldier: As the soldier's military forces of Europe, the Wizard of DEM Task Force and the Ace Wizard of SSS.


 * SquadNickname: She has callsign "Seorikasu 12".


 * SuperStrength: She breaks a huge wall of steel as if it were paper.


 * TermsOfEndangerment: She gives many offensive nicknames for various people, and all of hates because of that.


 * TortureTechnician: Her previous occupation before becoming a SSS Wizard, and she even shows her torture techniques in torturing her opponent physically, psychologically and sexually in battle.


 * TheUnfettered: She does not care about anything as she reaches her goal. She is willing to commit any atrocity for revenge. And all this because of a simple scar that was caused by her  own cowardice!


 * VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: Her last name "Liddell" come likely comes from Samuel Liddell MacGregor Mathers, one of the three founders of the Hermetic Order of the Golden Dawn. Like Ellen, she is the only Wizard who is able to fight evenly with a Spirit. See her entry in WorldsStrongestMan.


 * VillainousBreakdown: See her BerserkButton section.


 * WalkingSpoiler: She is revealed to be the true main antagonist after she "usurped" the role of the BigBad of the spin-off, Edgar F. Caroll.


 * WeHaveReserves: When she became the Ace Wizard of SSS, she considered the SSS Wizards nothing but expendable parts for her own ego.


 * WhyWontYouDie: She says that to Mikie after defeating her several times.


 * WomanInBlack / WomanInWhite: In all her appearances, she is wearing a black Cr-unit and/or a white combat wiring suit.


 * WouldHitAGirl: Definitely. Would also to abuse and kill defenseless children, mainly underage girls.


 * WouldHurtAChild: Eh........


 * YouGotSpunk: She openly says she hates courage of people who rise up against her.


 * YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: She joined with Edgar only to get what she wanted. When she got what she wanted, she betrayed Edgar after manipuled him.


 * YouMonster: Ashley said this one for Minerva in volume 4 during the final battle for all her inhuman atrocities.


 * YoureJustJealous: She was this in the prior of the spin-off. 