Thread:Looperreallyreallysucks/@comment-29414935-20190122103335/@comment-29414935-20190202172533

I don't know if I have made sometimes my villains too heinous and vile, so just one of them can count.

For example: I have in the dark depressing and emotional story two villains who could count. But the second one sounds much worse in his crimes than the main one.

The main one is the uncle of the protagonist who mentally and physically tortures his own daughter and ruined the life of his nephew (the protagonist), when he was a child he got sometimes beaten by his father who later kills himself. Then he was very aggressive like his father and often mentally and physically tortures his mother, like disfigure her entire face with a kitchen knife. When he sees her 15 years later, he blames her for what he has becoming instead of excuse to her for what he did to her as a child. When the mother attacks him, he kills her. He also one time kills and mutilated the teacher of his nephew because she saw that he abuses him.

The second one is the right-hand of the main one and a charismatic hypocrite. He kidnaps the patients of the main one, who are childrens and do inconceivably things with them. He ties them on a table and gives them a adrenaline syringe so they can feel every second of it. He then rapes them and tortures them until they die on bloodloss in mutilating slowly their bodies. One time he got two female siblings, a 8 year old and a 11 year old. He tied up the 11 year old one and sexually mistreat her, he then let her watch how he mutilate her little 8 year old sister. But don't worry he get a equal deserved death. But still it's dark sh*t!!

I have a feeling I already told you about it but not sure.