Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-31330278-20190906234956

BOT: Is it possible to change these articles name from "Casanova" to "Nick Ruskin" and "Deinonychus" to "Deinonychus (Carnosaur)"? There's more than one villain carrying the names Casanova and deinonychus in this wiki, so people might not know where to look.

https://villains.fandom.com/wiki/Casanova

https://villains.fandom.com/wiki/Deinonychus

1. A conversation about JP2 gave me an idea for retconning Raven. Writing her as a controversial heroic extremist. A woman who's the incarnation of "the road to hell is paved with good intentions" and "the cause is noble, but the actions are horrible". Something like the female version of Nick Van Owen (Bastille Nixon). Just like Nick when he released the dinosaurs, and more importantly emptied Tembo's gun from live bullets, Raven can do something bad out of good intentions. And just like my idea about Bastille, which is a character I wish to add to the possible future JP2 reboot, Raven will go down like a lion to the slaughter. Heroically sacrificing herself to save Yang and the others. Do you see the good people do something similar?

2+4C. Since Hela is similar to some other power-hungry psychopaths I know (examples: Scar, Ramsay, Babyface, Ahmanet, Tim Burton's Red Queen), I can speculate that part of her cruel ambitions and hatred toward her father and family are hating Thor/other siblings for being born or feeling like her father loved her siblings better. Which of these father issues make more sense to you? And when was the moment she went in Doctor Burns' way? I'm not saying Burns scared me, just like Hela not scaring me, but there's something horrifying about a doctor becoming a physical death god. If Burns was truly a bad person, then I consider the grim possibility that he could eventually become a Palpatine like Hela.

3. If Sergio survived Toxocara's utter torture, do you see him becoming more like King Stefan, or more like a soft version of Prince Blackheart? Also, I know Sir Thomas will be killed by Jester in a way that can be described only as psychological torture moving through his whole body until being drained from the inside, assuming he won't be stuck in the agonizing limbo for the possibility of a sequel, but it would be awesome to see him burned to death by an acid-breathing dragon. I wonder if the part where Sergio (or was it Karr? I get mixed up sometimes) having his blood drained by laser-like little dots, and then being burned in a pillar off green fire/any death energy you like feels like being burned/melted by Maleficent.

4A. If I was Three Days Grace, I would copy-paste what you've just said and write it on my biggest compliments list. It's kinda like how got the whole idea for Angel Posdonllo after hearing "I'm Your Angel" by Celine Dion. Jester is a homicidal extremist, so I get why people who doesn't know any better might see him as a bad man. But why did Stan Lee wrote Magneto as the bad guy? Are we suppose to antagonize a holocaust survivor who isn't completely wrong? I once had someone in work who even theorized that Charles Xavier is less familiar with human nature than Magneto, and sadly, it makes a great deal of sense.

4B. If we assume Harlemface is missing in goodness, then he's the new lesser evil of his franchise, and therefore more like Joel than like Marlene. Since Marlene wanted to kill Ellie for a non-certain cure, I believe Jamal never did anything that Marlene wouldn't do/hadn't done already. Marlene does sounds complicated, but do you see her being capable of redemption? Not every redeemable villain is capable of redemption, so it's important to ask.

5A. Molly and Dima raising the child is a good closer for both (Dima will probably be killed by Cheshire, but still). But maybe Quazi could make sense in a possible part 5. Now, I think I have an idea for how Cat can kill Goldie: Many fairytale characters will attend to Pinocchio's 8th birthday. Fox will be absent and use his absence to sabotage the electricity. He'll use the cover of darkness to attack Pinocchio while Cat will drag Goldie to the meat locker and strangle her with one of the hang ropes. The dead Goldie will be hanged like one of the meat chunks, and Cat will hide, ready to kill the first person who'll search for Goldie. Still working on the man who'll be Cat's second on-screen victim. Who do you see as the most likely person to be killed in his/her attempt to find Goldie? Cat will kill both Goldie and her intended rescuers, because Fox will escape after stabbing Pinocchio in his shoulder.

5B+C. The man removed it from his page. I choose to interpret it as change of heart. Now, you do have a good point about not trusting a complete stranger with one's child. On the other hand, the queen trusted Cassandra, so it can go either way. When Cassandra became a villain, did she became evil, or more like Varian? And would it make sense if Cassandra had a deal with the devil like Gothel probably had?

5D. The first episode is nice. I'll probably change my mind for the better after a second reading. I like how you wrote episodes like a script. I usually write my own original stories as a combination of scripts and prose (the dialogues are scripted, the descriptions are prose) too. But when I write flashbacks/descriptions of the past, I prefer either letting the characters talk about it, or describing it in a tilted font (like this). I also prefer to put the characters' sentences between inverted commas ("like this"). From what I've read about Poe, I picture him as Lockwood. Another generous and benevolent man played by James Cromwell. "Dark Seraphs: The End of Days. Nice title drop :-). Amanda's description makes me imagine her like Giorgia Whigham/Mary Elizabeth Winstead. "Not too much fun... or you'll have a very painful talk"? Is George one of those father who projecting their feelings to their wives on their daughters (there are many of those), or just not liking Alexander as a human being? Hearing Jester ignited the American revolution makes me like him even more. It was one of the few revolutions that ended for the better, so I respect the man who took the initiative. If Corvus, Jester and their ancient warlords buddies will run out of souls, they can always play on Duck a L'orange lol.