Thread:Loudfan21000/@comment-24200891-20180324223508/@comment-24200891-20180524045715

I don't like that when Lincoln just tries to get better treatment or stop having inconvinient situations then he's painted as selfish. It's normal people don't want to live in bad conditions like classmates punishing him for no reason like in making the grade.

Your 2nd acapite reminds me Yoshi's lines from his S2 video, that the writers make themselves look insecure. He said that Kevin wrote Brawl and No laughing matter, what makes him say that criticizing his bad episodes is a bad thing.

Your expansion would be interesting, but you shall know that many tried to write sequels to AFR and FP, so don't make same mistakes as them.