Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190923113331/@comment-29414935-20191002210606

I have one story that is a comedy that doesn't take itself very seriously (maybe just the villain who really could count as Pure Evil). It is supposed to be for children but it has plenty two-sided and perverted jokes, the protagonist is clumsy and overall it's comedic. The two main characters is a male clumsy humanoid horse and a female little and cute sheep, who is his secretary. I don't think they are both Pure Good, just to mention it. First they have corrupting qualities and second they are just too funny. And they are best friends, and the horse is one time very shocked and "horny" when she dressed herself very "sexy", but I don't know if they should have a romantic relationship. I mean they would be one of my most unique couples because they are two different animals, but I think it's a story who is too comedic and stupid to make a serious romantic relationship. In my opinion, it fits more in more deeper and serious stories or comedies who not go this "far". So yeah, what do you think? I mean sure, I have pairs who are dog and wolf, wolf and fox, dog and fox etc, but they are all under the "canine" type and very similar. So that's not very unique like a horse and a sheep.

I want to go back to the villain for a second, and I remember already talked with you about him. I don't really know if he would maybe count and I'm undecided with him. He is the main antagonist of the story and the archenemy of the two. First of all, he is surprisingly not a murderer, but he did other horrible things. He always creates dangerous torture traps in which he always captures the two and wants to kill them slowly with it to enjoy it with his sadism. In the finale, he succeeds in stealing the magical horns and turns everyone in the kingdom in things like tables, trees, food or all that, which causes them to be still conscious but they can't move. He then tortures and mocking some of them. He is able to capture and tie up the two together and puts them on a platform where underneath is a vat full of mass with eyes, arms, mouths etc. It was a weird and disturbing slime, where he already threw a few people in it, which where "merged" with it and now are still conscious and feel pain and can't move for all eternity. So he mentally tortures them in intentionally throwing rocks over a target and gleefully watches. So what do you think?