User blog:Sirin of the Void/PE Proposal - Loretta (The Curse of Millhaven)


 * Original: [//villains.fandom.com/f/p/3179493162221867900 https://villains.fandom.com/f/p/3179493162221867900]

Gonna do a quick proposal for Loretta (aka Lottie) from the song "The Curse of Millhaven" by Nick Cave. I already wrote this EP six times, but thanks to the f*cking stupid discussion format, it keeps getting deleted, so to avoid more accidents, I'll have to make this proposal as short and simple as possible. So if this EP lacks detail, don't just delete or criticize it with the first chance you have. It will ONLY be because I'm really tired of "discussion accidents" at this point. Let's begin.

Loretta is a sadistic teenager who kills while acting as a "curse". She murders a boy by bashing in his head, murders a handyman by decapitating him and putting his head in a fountain, and stabs her neighbor to death. When she is arrested, she gleefully confesses to committing the aforementioned murders. She also reveals that she stole and hid a "warning" sign from an icy lake, resulting in the deaths of several kids. She also reveals that she burned down a slum, resulting in more deaths. She frequently states that "all God's children [must] die".

As for redeeming qualities, the only time she shows ANY "remorse"...is when she is sad that she can't commit any more crimes. So no, no redeeming qualities.

As for heinous standards? Even though it is mentioned that a couple other people crucified a dog, they are clearly less heinous that Loretta. So yes, Loretta passes the heinous standards.

My final verdict is a "yes". Please vote (trust me, my original EP was MUCH better and more detailed than this).