Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20181201153231/@comment-29414935-20190306104150

Ah ok, now I think I understand.

Yeah, that's why I want to do it. Because I always not had the courage to do it, maybe because she is one of my favourites not favourite character of mine and I intended her at first to be one of the only characters in my stories to not be harmed ever. But then I realised it don't work in such story and it would be boring or even annoying for people, because she did bad stuff too, not always good. Then I saw that some movie makers made that too one female characters, they don't harmed them the entire story but then brought them in situations, like capture, what was shocking for the audience. So I thought I did that too on the wolf lady multiple times, even when it works the first time the most and is most effective. So it's more unexpected and new if a badass character who is strong and skilled enough to never be captured by someone or poilce, is suddenly in a situation where she/he is in great danger and is captured so she/he can't do anything anymore and need help from their friends. That would also shown what good friends they are and even they need help sometimes. And honestly, I feel more for her since I did this with her, that she got captured more than twice, even if she isn't hurt or harmed. That's a good sign I guess, and it's also good if you as the writer, felt bad for your characters and exspecially if you have favourite ones. Did you know that feeling too? I loved it! And btw it depends on the story type how brutal or bloody it is, to make your characters suffer more or less. The story with the wolf lady is sometimes bloody and brutal but most of the time it's in the "middle" I said, without big suffering from injuries or blood loss. So I think it's fitting how I handled it. Because she is captured and not necessairly hurt or harmed or be in big suffer (only psychological but not physically), and capturings are common and fitting in this type of story (detective/crime/action).