User blog comment:Itay66647/Pure Evil Proposal: Commander Lyle Rourke/@comment-39032584-20191012224008

Ah, now that's more like it Itay. Yes, this guy is a keeper; he just about doomed an entire civilization to death just to get rich, and ultimately betrayed practically everyone who seemed to be on his side. The worst part is that he didn't even have to steal and sell the Heart of Atlantis to get rich; the mere discovery of it probably would have been enough to earn some kind of generous award.

If I may offer a couple of suggestions to help you improve even more moving forward though, try to elaborate more on, or at least make sure to mention all the things he does that contribute to his credentials. There are certain things you left out like threatening to shoot Princess Kida and murdering her father afterwards. For people who aren't familar with the film at all, it really helps to have a clearer idea of everything notable he does along the way. Also, try to use your own wording; looking at his character page, a good chunk of what you wrote looks like it was copied-and-pasted straight from that. Other than that though, good job.