Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-31330278-20190916234018

1.Until Raven will finish her redemption, and stop creating situations where Ruby and Yang might feel uncomfortable, I have ideas for rebooting "The Lost World". Here are the main points of change:

A. Bastille Nickson - Instead of a male photographer who was sent by Hammond to sabotage Ludlow's efforts to bring dinosaurs to the continent, my version will have a female criminal who was bailed by Hammond in exchange for executing his redemption. Bastille will be very much like what I want Raven to be. She will do horrible things out of noble intentions (releasing the dinosaurs inside the camp, emptying Tembo's rifle from live bullets and so on), but unlike Nick, Bastille will redeem herself at her final moments. The heroes group will get to the abandoned worker village, chased by the raptors, and most of the raptors will take a step back. Except for the obsessed raptor who got killed by Kelly, the others will take a step back because of the same giant chameleons from the novel. Sarah will figure out that there's something in the worker village that scares even the raptors. After Sarah will figure out that their enemy is invisible, Bastille will take out a flare and throw it. The chameleons' outlines will be shown for a brief moment. Bastille will order the others to run away and get help while she fights the chameleons. The creatures will chase the flare long enough for the others to get away and get help. The remaining heroes will get to an abandoned radio station and try to communicate with the outside world. The scene will end with one of the chameleons limping out of the building, looking at the corpses of his mate and Bastille with one eye, and looking at the horizon thinking about revenge with the other.

B. Heather Ludlow - Hammond's vicious niece who look Tembo in the eyes without blinking. She'll be less like the canon Ludlow and more like a soft version of Cinder. Her only real redeeming quality will be regrets for losing her enforcer's respect and obedience. The canon Ludlow got Ajay killed in the long grass because he was stupid. Heather will shove Ajay as a bait for the raptors and kill some of them to fake leadership. Later, when Papa-Rex will rampage at San Diego, Heather will both hunt for the baby and attempt to kill Malcolm and Sarah. In the part where Malcolm tease the cop with "if you really want to stop us, you should shoot us", Heather will shoot him in the neck and miss his vital parts with less than an inch. Heather will refer to it as "a weak choice of words" and resume her hunt. She will close on Sarah at the same canon storage and attempt to kill her as a consolation prize after the baby got away. Given Sarah will be more like her novel counterpart and Heather will be more like Dodgson, they'll engage a serious fight, which will end when Sarah will get a grip on her tranquillizer. A tranquillizer arrow to Heather's leg will do its charm, and Sarah will tie Heather using her blood stained shirt. By the time Heather will take up, she'll see Papa-Rex and the baby approaching with the same "are you brave on children? Come here, you horse crap of a person!" face from the canon. She'll free herself from the shirt which tied her hands behind her back, draw a knife and jump on the escaping baby. Papa-Rex will break her legs and she'll respond in hysteric laughter vs the terrified screaming of the canon Ludlow. The baby will jump on her, and her last words will be "well played, uncle John. Well fucking played!".

C. The chameleon carnotaurs - Just like in the novel, they'll live at the abandoned working village. After Bastille will kill one of them, the remaining one will track down the others. I'm thinking about putting more chameleon carnotaurs in part 3, playing a creature that even Spino-Rex isn't hasty about messing with.

D. Sarah - The canon Sarah was great and tough on her own right, but her reboot version will have more traits of her novel counterpart, namely fighting Heather without any help.

E. The surviving InGen hunters - After most of them will be killed by the raptors and Mama-Rex, the remaining few will gather around Heather, who will use them to kill the heroes group before they all leave the island. Unfortunately for the hunters, they'll meet the heroes, the remaining chameleon and Tembo who came to avenge Ajay.

2. On topic: I know Odin wasn't always the nicest god, but thinking about someone reforming only after creating someone more evil than themselves is weird. Thor must having mixed feelings about his father's hypocrisy. I choose to believe Odin used to eat himself up for a long time due to knowing he have a part of his daughter's psychopathy. If he isn't, then he could become Roy Burns like nothing :-(. Does Hela reminds you of a reversed David Banner, or more like Emil Blonsky? Either way, Odin's Marvel version have many traits of General Ross.

Off topic: Villains Rap Battles' page is out:

https://villains.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:ScaryMovie53/Villains_Rap_Battles

Episode 1 will come soon. If Sofia lamb will be a contester, the replacement judge will probably be Kane. Since you seems to like him as a villain, I would like to hear your angle about what makes him unique.

3. Thomas' slow soul crushing sounds like Saruman's last moments, stuck in his tower and getting his staff broken before Grima killed him out of spite. The offensive statements were meant to reflect his emotions, or just for intimidation? If you feel like Thomas' death needs a more graphic description/taking more time, I recommend to make it as longer as you need. Just mention the episode's name and number, like you always do, and you'll be fine on that aspect. And again, good job at doing him bad. Hating your own character in meta-level is a quality "Game Of Thrones" would appreciate.

4A. Magneto should've been marked as an MIG from day one. More like Joel and less like Marlene. You marked Jester as an MIG, and Stan Lee should've done the same. I mean, a holocaust survivor have the right to hate mankind. And here's another question about grey characters from the holocaust: Rumkowski was the head judenrat of Lodz Ghetto. He's one of the more controversial characters, because he can claim he wanted to keep the ghetto working as long as possible on one hand, and sculptured the ghetto as his ministate on the other hand. Driving his limo in front of the poor ghetto inhabitances is one bad thing, but what really bugs me about him is his vision to kill every 10 and younger children for what he saw as keeping the working population alive and running. I see him as a bad man. Someone whom I love dearly said that the holocaust is a period of time where most people cannot be judged, and see Rumkowski as missing in goodness. Where do you stand about him?

4B. Obviously she was a better person than David and I agree she might've used alternatives in case an alternative choice will ever present itself, but i'm still aloud to add her to this wiki, right? Maybe she's not evil, but I don't know if I can feel safe in a survivors settlement led by her. Is she similar to your vision for Charles the architect (reversed Magneto and all)?

5A. Teddy make sense. We already have a dead kid (Pinocchio), and we're not doing exploitation here, so i'll probably write Teddy as a teenager. Alice will be killed by Cheshire in part 4. Didn't planned Snow White yet. She can be the replacement mayor after Humphry Orwell was murdered in part 2. And her son, Richard White (pun intended. He played Gaston in the animated BATB), can be a high-ranked police officer. If I put them in there, which odds of survival would you give them? And would writing Snow as one of Amadeus Blumberg's victims make sense in context?

5B. After seeing "Charlie's Angels: Full Throttle", it occurred to me that Casandra is like a far softer version of Madison Lee. Dylan is Rapunzel minus the healing powers. Being played by Drew Barrymore doesn't hurt lol. Madison had a very tangled symbolism in here, from being a female Lucifer to the scene where she was crying with one eye and pissed off with the other. The crying eye was for a grudge against Charlie for a failed operation where she almost got killed (it was her fault. She risked her partners' lives, like she always do, and whining about a couple of bullets which she earned). The pissed off eye was far her unfulfilled wish to become god. Similarly to Rapunzel, Dylan had her own gothel, who forced her to escape her tower and change a big portion of her identity. Joining Eugene is a lot like a fantasy setting's witnesses protection program (searching for the bright lights ever since she was a baby, freeing herself from Gothel by cutting her hair for good in order to revive Eugene with the last of her strengths and stuff), and Dylan went from witnesses protection program to one of Charlie's angels. And the part she threw an harasser on a songs machine is the grownups version for Rapunzel's pan. Varian had a counterpart too, in the shape of the fourth angel Bossley. Only second watching made me realize that the angel who kept civilians of harm's way was just as important to the mission as the three fighting angels. I hope the good people will see the movie, make their conclusions and get Varian becoming a Bossley.

5C. It took me some time, but I finished episode 2. Since it's a long episode, i'll divide it to the good and the not so good. You have some grammar errors in "his master/mistress" (you should write one specific gender title. "His master"/"his mistress") and in "Jessica struggled to get to her feet" (you should write "Jessica struggled to get on her feet"). When my character is getting snarky/deadpan/wise guy, I don't spell the tone. I just write the text and count the audience's intelligent to know the tone by context.

The rest is great. I know Jessica is a great character, but you surprised me for the better with her being a genius. Not just getting to college by the age of 14 and surviving her Clayton-like Uncle. It's for knowing to summon the right demon. Does her outdated dresses were meant to show she's missing her non-exist childhood? "I just got done Drawing you a bath lol. By "Admired the blood red sky and Christal reflection of the mortal world", you wanted to symbolize Jester's dark side, or did you talked about the corrupted world the characters lives in? I know technically uncle James is more evil, but his accountant is crawling under my skin to a greater extent. If James will shoot him, he'll have it coming. I wonder if James' behavior and last name means you based him partly on Commander Rourke (last name for Rourke and first name after the late James Garner who dubbed him). Jessica hiding in the closet is kinda like "Alien: Isolated", where the protagonist have to hide in lockers without even breathing, hoping the xenomorphs and androids won't find her. Good job at creating a creepy atmosphere. How long did uncle James hate her? "I just want to reunite you with them" with intention to stab her is harsh even in my standards. Did he hate her because he was envy that his brother have a daughter and he doesn't, or just for being born? Such deep hatred is beyond wanting her money. Jester did the right thing with breaking James' neck. He can't stab James in the heart, because James have none. I have a lot to say against baptism, so I can see why Jester didn't want to do anything related to them. Does the fact you got your nickname from Jester means that Jester's real name is Scott?