Thread:Cronus 300/@comment-22439-20150420150429/@comment-24738227-20160114140516

I think these are very good ideas, nice job! :)

By the way Important Notice: 

For the beginning of the story I've decided in order to make the story more realistic, and add more suspense, that Franz Hopper doesn't appear until later in the story and that instead of Aelita living in the Hermitage, she actually stays over with Jeremie and his parents at their place, perhaps during the holidays, and this is where she has her nightmare.