Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-4708882-20190917035310

1. Damn, honestly sounds better than the original to me and I like the changes based off the description! Bastille is probably my favorite change given the sheer amount of potential and difference.

2. On topic: Yeah it is a bit weird but I think that both Odin and Thor are conflicted a bit on the past. I see Hela more like David Banner to be honest.

Off topic: Cool! With Kain he's a bit like a Shakespearean character who is often blunt and at the the same time very sophisticated. That and he actively defied the fate he was destined for and at the end was able to actually defeat (though not kill) the omniscient and omnipresent entity who had manipulated all the events. He could throw probably some insults directly towards her the ideology and hypocrisy pointing out she should at least be honest about it.

3. To reflect the cruelty of the past along with his ideology/emotions. I might make the fight last a little longer in hindsight to put more damage on both sides and debating to add as the only thing I know I want is to put Sir Thomas in a feeling of hopelessness so he can somewhat experience what he puts everyone through. I think it's episode 8 or 9 but I'll have to check, yeah he's basically similar to Joffrey Baratheon in hate level for my story.

4A. I personally don't know a lot about him. While its possible he had some delusional thoughts or attempted some methods in at time where the morality was grey and black vs clear cut good and evil I lean to him not being MIG due to him sounding like a major prick who flaunted his wealth.

4B. I personally lean to a page on her but she was deleted and is one we might have to have a discussion as a site on her given the controversy.

5A. That sounds cool and glad to hear Teddy might be in it. Nice pun and the chances of survival not entirely sure. It depends on the level of skill on both parts along with the area as even a skilled person can be killed a lot easier if caught by surprise with no knowledge of the area.

5B. That movie sounds like its fun and full of cool similarities, I might have to give a shot and thanks for recommending it bro. :)

5C. Good call outs, I will change the title to simply master to make it easier and fix those grammar errors no problem. I only do the mention of difference as a few lines are vague in tone and with Jester its drastic, he's more loud and overdramatic in tone a lot of the time so when he decides to change to pure anger or deadpan to emphasize more than his standard sarcasm, I might work on that one though as well.

Glad you overall enjoyed it! :) The outdated dress to stress both her never having no real childhood but also how she feels out of place and how in many ways Jester is stuck in the past. In-universe one reason is Jester hates revealing clothing and desires her to retain her modesty and "class". The sky shows a darker and easier to miss attribute of Jester and that the world is a dark place, Jester envies humanity as they can enjoy their world freely while he needs a master to just exist in it. The accountant was a way to show how corrupt and manipulative even normal humans can be without the use of any magic. James can be seen as similar to him but less skilled and his last name Rooks is in a way similar to the rook chess piece which can only move in a straight line, while Jessica is complex despite the name James is not at all. I think he always hated his niece and even his brother solely because they "took" what was his: the attention of others and the money. I couldn't help but have Jester mock the baptism as I am not a fan, I do reveal Jester's name at a later point (Mattius Longstreet) and I use it as an alias as I always loved the concept of jesters and this Jester is the oldest original character I have (a lot of redesigning and changes but ultimately my favorite one).