Thread:Kooshmeister/@comment-12599421-20180130002106/@comment-13359-20180415124811

Thanks. Addressing your suggestions one by one:

1. I see your comment was written in January. I'm only just now noticing it here in April. I've since continued the script as of March, although it's on hiatus again. Gray Taylor does appear and get turned into a Ci-Kat-A, as in the episode premise. I kept him as just a rookie accompanying her (and another veteran Enforcer) on his first mission, so he hasn't relly known Felina long enough to have had a relationship with her anyway.

2. I never claimed the guards were Enforcers. Only that Belljar is coordinating his efforts with the Enforcer biotech division. Despite the similarities of their uniforms, I've also never thought about the MASA security personnel being Army soldiers; I just assumed they were security guards employed by MASA the way each facility or place of business has (more or less) its own unique guard uniforms and insignia. The MASA guards' insignia is pretty generic and differs from what I gave Boggs and his men anyway.

3. I'd like to include Steel, but, as it is, the script is pretty overcrowded with characters so far.