Thread:B1bl1kal/@comment-24618333-20161201003544/@comment-24618333-20161209125018

B1bl1kal, when i busily doing another cleanup, i suddenly recalled on story that i once made up to a classmate of mine back when i still enrolled in Senior High School. It was about a young private detective named Raido whom, just like David "Raido" Stutler (protagonist of The Steampunk Adventures of Sorcerer's Apprentice and steampunk counterpart of Dave Stutler), he's also a young Sorcerer. That story was looked like this:

''Raido, whom just have solved a case regarding goblin attacks, reunited with his estranged mother Holly on the day he got a new case involving demon attacks on a village. Holly learned about the case and for an unknown reasons, she insist that he should bring her along so she can see how good her aon's talent as private investigator. Raido eagerly agreed, though sensea that she may had other motives.''

''By the time Raido, Holly, and Raido's show Fairy assistant Snowy arrived at the village, they found the case was something more than what they bargained for: All pumpkins in the village were possessed by demons and as result, turned into monsters that threatened to destroyed everything. Upon further investigation, they were conjured by a mysterious old hag that dressed like Wicked Witch of the West from Oz named Mesmerelda. But when the old hag showed in front of Raido, Holly, and snowy, it's reValed that Holly had bad history with Mesmerelda where Mesmerelda killed her father when she was 10. To make matter worse, Mesmerelda is neither a human nor sorceress: Mesmerelda is a powerful demoness whom born due to some kind of satanic ritual: A legend said that her mother was some kind of demon-worshipper and one day, during Halloween, she asked a demon to help her have a child. And the said witch's wish was granted, at least until her baby suddenly changed once grew into a little girl. The girl, whom named Mesmerelda, suddenly transformed into a hideous demoness: Her hair fall out as her whole body become so skeletal that she become devoid of male/female characteristics similar with that of Wendigo (Until Dawn), her head become literally looked like demonic Jack'o Lantern, bat-like wings sprouts on her back, and she grew six acorpion-like tails that can reach 5 meters.''

The revelation made Raido realized that it's not just his mother that in danger, but also everyone in the village and beyond.

Do you think the story is creepy?