User blog:Jaredthefox92/Is this article good?

I'm working on an article for one of my antagonist races in my science fiction series, Evolution Wars on the FANON wiki and I wanted to know what other's think of it thus far. Eventually I shall make an article for their nemisis race the Voidians,(since the Igarrians are good guys and belong more on the Heros wiki anyway.) I just wanted to know if these bad guys are interesting enough and if the article has been created properly. Here it is:  http://villainsfanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Braxxian_Empire