Thread:B1bl1kal/@comment-24618333-20140927020556/@comment-24618333-20141007050152

I know that you love The Sorcerer's Apprentice as much as me as i help editing Sorcerer's Apprentice wikia. The movie also inspire me to made a fiction about a young sorcerer who always save the day both as a sorcerer and private detective(perhaps someday i would, cuz my freetime is limited). This sorcerer, whom i called Raido, is recognizable by his attire that resembles Yasunori Kato's, even has powers than comparable to him. The young sorcerer also enrolls in magic school as well. But i must tell you that story that i wish to made about him was not same with Harry Potter was because of these reason:

1. The story would takes place in a steampunk fantasy version of our world in year of 1938-1939, prior to world war 2.

2. Though in 1938-1939, techniques that invloved with magical skills, which some refers as sorcery, are not ceased to exist, but rather reinvented so it would be suit for advanced era. Ex: a magic skills involved electricity amplified via tesla coils and other electrical stuffs. Even magic with incantation is rare, and the magic in my story no longer requires wands/staves/rings. Magical skills also combined with armed melee combat/hand-to-hand combat skills as well.

3. Raido lives with his parents and rest of family whom love him, unlike Harry who lost his family at hands of his nemesis Voldemort when he is baby and rest of his family, namely Dursleys, treat him badly. Even unlike Harry, Raido's enemies are larger in numbers, as they consist of multiple factions in which one of them turned out works for Nazis, even some of them merely humans/vampires, unlike Harry whom only has 1 nemesis and 1 faction.

4. Not all people in my story is ordinary human. Among them are Magus, an offshot of human species whom has evolved to the point that they possesses superhuman physiology much like Conduits from inFamous game series. They also learns magic like humans in my story, albeit they could learn faster and became a dangerous opponent even with basic spells. Magus also possesses regenerative healing factor, where they can regenerate lost limbs and endure wounds that fatal to normal humans. Although, they are not immortal, as they still can be killed had they suffer blood loss, decapitation, or having a sharp object, like a stake, stuck in their heart too long, as their heart are body part that has lowest regeneration rate, and destruction of the brain. Not only that, their regenerative abilities also expand their lifespan, made their overall lifespan being twice of normal humans'. Raidou also being one of them.

5. There won't be a broomstick as transportation in my story.

What do you think of this?