Thread:ScaryMovie53/@comment-4708882-20171002235215/@comment-4708882-20171226013756

2.  I plan to have him crushed trapped in basically a gravity well after he pissed off a killer by the alias Shi Motarasu (a friend of the hero but a villain himself; real name: Yorokobi Motarasu) by attacking a woman both loved all while bragging he was practically immortal.

A. The hero is a young alchemist with who works for a captain of basically pirates after he lost his adopted family named Xylus, most alchemists were basically wiped out and he's not even aware of his family at first and has the unique trait of not needing to follow the rule of equivalent exchange. The hero mostly just is an adventurer that wants to have fun with his friends but seeks to collect some magical objects to prevent Toxocara (basically the devil) from taking over the body of Bristol (basically a godlike figure and the avatar of the universe). He's tan, has wild blond hair wears a red unbuttoned, shirt blue baggy pants and stone flip flops. He carries a mystic pirate sword made of gold with a handle made of jewels that is extremely durable.

B. It's primarily a Fantasy in an alternate reality. The fantasy is some magic with it some orks, demons (spirits called Sentient Parasites), alchemy and some people born with powers similar to mutants.

C. Kar has his two sons: Aaron Ryder who is the youngest but appears the oldest due to suffering from malnutrition and being 7'2. Arguably the most redeemable character who dies trying to make amends. The other one is Sergio Ryder who manipulates two females and only cares for himself, money and power. The three main heroes Xylus, Richard of the wood and Abigail. Richard of the wood is a young black man that is somewhat of a cryptic and a little anti-social but who has the ability to talk to animals and skilled with a double ended hook type staff. His main out fit is a green hoodie, blue pants and boots. Abigail a tan woman with green hair and is a person who is kind to her crew but a bit hot headed at times greedy and can be rather violent to those she isn't close with. Most her outfit is standard pirate clothing and a sword. Shi himself was arguably the most fun due to his power to control gravity, giving him a backstory to explain why he's cynical and nihilistic but he isn't one of the main character's often and functions as the final villain.

3. I could see one of the pigs living long enough to reveal something important but I don't think any of them would live to see the end. My guess would be McDonald killing them due to fearing they could reveal something due to him probably being impulsive and a little reckless in the attempts to cover his tracks.

5. Anytime bro and I'm just happy I can help you some. :)

6. Luckily for me most jocks didn't mess with me too much after I stood up for someone and hit one obnoxious one in the shoulder blade. Even the teacher told him he deserved it. Don't think I've seen Obscure but it sounds pretty good from what you are saying.

7. I'm glad you also found interesting. Santio sounds like a good example of a corrupt cop and could see him being interesting to see karma catch up with him.