Thread:B1bl1kal/@comment-24618333-20170317150526/@comment-24618333-20170322072125

I had another question before resuming what of scenario that supposedly able to fix various flaws from the film. I had a story that often popped in my mind, sometimes cuz i was too excited on things, and that story was like this:

''A young sorcerer in training whom, i just called Roku, is facing greatest tests in his life: First, when saving his hometown from wraith invasion, around 80% of the town was destroyed in the ensuing battle. As result, he lost his respect from townsfolk who frowned on him in spite of invading enemies have been driven away through his effort. Then, when he and his friends and fellow sorcerers (namely his girlfriend Zoe, Coyote, and Jake) eventually confront the Dark Warlock who responsible for wraith invasion prior, the Dark Warlock revealed that the attack was merely distracting them from a dark ritual that resulting him to turned into a demonic creature. To demonstrated his dark powers, Dark Warlock uses his magic to brainwashed Zoe, Coyote, and Jake to his side, mutating them into hideous creature like himself before have them followed him to destroy the town.''

''Roku briefly loses hope until his mentor showed up and reminded him that he had power to undo Dark Warlock's evil influence on his friends, even giving him a necessary tool to do so. Now determined to save hia friends from becoming mindless monsters for the rest of their loves, Roku set out to after the Dark Warlock. During the pursuit, mutated Zoe, Coyote, and Jake confronted him, yelled that he  betrayed them for Dark Warlock. Roku knows this is just Dark Warlock's ploy against him. He tried to snap them out from the brainwash, but realized that the tool his master gave to him iz the only way to save them. He managed to succesfully undoing his friends' brainwashing, returned them to normal.''

''But to his friends' surprise, Roku forbade them to help him in fighting Dark Warlock as he blamed himself for their brainwashing. Zoe tried to reasoned with him, but he left to face Dark Warlock anyway. When Romu and Dark Warlock battles, the fight proved difficult as not only Dark Warlock stronger than him, but warriors whom assigned to protect the recovering town believing Roku to be worse threat than Dark Warlock that they attacked the young sorcerer. Their interference allowed Dark Warlock to flee in confusion, while at the same time, Roku managed to escape from te warriors' grasp. He knew that his failure to prevent wraith invasion from causing much damage resulting them believing him to be a threat for the town, but he didn't care, ad stopping Dark Warlock is the main priority. Reason why he didn't asked his friends' aid was because of fear of losing them. Ignoring the fact that he was alone in facing his enemy and proteCirs of the town perceived him as enemy, he pressed om and resume the fight against Dark Warlock.''

''Later on, Zoe, Coyote, and Jake managed to catch up with Roku, only to find him exhaused with Dark Warlock lays dead beaide him. Zoe mistaking warriors who protect the town have killed them, but to her and her friends' surprise, Roku defeated Dark Warlock all by himself, with them only able to watch the fight.''

What do you think about this story?