Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20171028122210/@comment-24200891-20171030125339

They could have be not ridiculous and not use Clyde and needless field tests. In my fanfic Lori is antagonistic, because I didn't know her better side, when I was writting the story. Besides how interesting would the story be without conflict? Lori is annoyed by her new sibling and pushes him away, she realises she does wrong, when Luna gave her reason she sucks speech. I could have added she fed him with ice cream and take him to her bed to sleep with him for the first time, but I didn't find it necessary.