Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20180211164358/@comment-31330278-20190215225912

1. Another father-related compexity: As said, one of my friends is completely fooled by his scams. She had been like that, with or without him, for nearly 3 years by now. I tell her about people that make me miserable/uncomfortable, but she's too naive to understand the complete picture and take each incident as it is. The complicated part is that she ain't like Charlize Bridger. She's sweet, loyal and very friendly to children. It's just that she became short-sighted and doesnt attentive to my neads. You're attentive to my needs. Other friends are attentive to my needs. But for some reason, she doesnt. I'm not gonna throw her behind my back. Not as long as this world lives. I know she cares about me. On one hand, she's like the sister i should have. Having a nice (albeit naive) and normal sister who heal my scars would be good. On the other hand, she need to learn a lot before becoming a mother, let alone my mother. People like my father will eat her alive. If she was a horror film character, Casey Becker and Marnie Cooper are some of the first names comes in mind when i think about people who reminds me of her. Is there a way i make her a smarter/more properly equipped person? And she would get caught in a relationship with people like Stupidface/Geekface/Billyface/Jones the cat/my father, how do i open her eyes without losing her friendship?

2. Does being creating for monstrous cause is considered being born a monster? And do you think Clarice have the ability to rehabilitate people like Hannibal and Buffalo Wheatley? I know Owen Grady could've make Hannibal into a lawful and contributing member of society, jusr like he could've train Indoraptor and Biggie. If the cop who dealed with Hannibal was someone like Detective Halloran and Logan Nelson, do you see this hypthetical over-zealot cop corrupting at-risk youth into becoming Hannibal?

3A. Famine is planned to be something like Sheriff George of Nottingham+50 kilos, or a little less visionary than that? Death sounds like Samuel Little. If not him, then maybe like Ted Bundy. If you like, you can do death as similar to a crazier version of Amadeus Blumbreg. Pestilence is the most realistic horseman from what i hear. Potentially poisoning people is something Dodgson would do. All 3 sounds awesome. And the fact none of them were meant to be sympathetic is a smart move :-). Famine and Pestilence make sense as sexist motherless bastards. Especially Pestilence. Death make sense as sexist IMO, because many serial killers who focus mainly on women likes to strangle and rape the victim before/during the murder. All three male horsemen are sick people, but who is planned to be the sickest of them all?

3B. Xylus almost got Shi redeemed, until Shi wanted to kill god? Damn, bro, that's scary in a brilliant way. And it's also realistic, because i just know that if Bristol/Anastasia/any god was real, one Frollo or another would try to kill him/her. Interesting to see Xylus-Toxocara's battle as mostly mental. Like with His Infernal Majesty, but far better. Now Shi is more sympathetic than some heroes we know. Dying due to his own powers and almost losing his girlfriend and only friend would drive everyone mad. If you want him to be evil enough despite being true affably evil and very sympathetic, i recommend to give him more victims before taking on Bristol. At least 5 or so, or at least 3 which will be killed in very grewsome ways.

4. Given Eagle Eyes might be a bright mirror to Carlos Panthiero, his self-righteousness and arrogance make a great deal of sense. Ricktators and Frollos are prone to use these type of enforcers. When i think of it, Rick and Courtney can go through a double and mutual process. Rick will realize he might become a human Sobek and Courtney will understand that the late Jane wasn't completely wrong. Berthold is less vulnerable to either of Courtney and Rick's shortcomings due to his "live and let live" approach. A down to earth kind of guy, who's also strong enough to physically challenge General Tiger. Jane does reminds of Carl. I dont understand the people who dislike Carl. You gotta respect a male Jane who saved his father from a brute like Shane (at least in the comics). Alister does make sense as the strict (not sharing his twin's cruelty and see creatures just like any crocodile would. No discrimination) member of the heroes group. I can hardly explain the scope of the compliment about Courtney reminds you of a fox Michonne/Carol. I guess mostly Michonne with a lot of Carol, right? Now, Sobek is obviously the Governor of "Neimerhold" universe. Which TWD characters reminds you of General Tiger and Maureen? I assume Berthold reminds you of a mixture of characters, insead of one or two defined characters, because he's similar to what most strong people would be in a similar situation.

5. From your review, i understand you like option B better. Thanks for telling me about Penda being under-powered in option A. As the cats will fight Jaden and Grey in that time, the most likely help Panda would get is enraging a hive of owl-sized hornets and send them over the squad, like how I-Rex executed Masrani using the pterosaurs. The pheromones grenades idea, also labled as option C, sounds great :-). Now, where can they get pheromones grenades? I might expand the plot for this idea. Thanks, bro. How do you visualize the supplier? It won't be the big bad, despite how much he afraid of Panda and want him dead (Panda is one of the only 2 creatures who terrify the big bad. The second is Stephany, which he already killed), but other than him, i'm open to ideas. Now Blitz isn't as wise as a leader should be, but he's stubbron and extremist rather than dumb. He refused to believe Grey when she told him the true, even slapped her and barked "killers have no right to express themselves!", so she had to run and dress as Manchester. One of the later scenes (i still hadn't got there in my writing process) shows Blitz and his two lieutenants Obadiah and Danny thinking about plans to keep the kennel running, "take care" of the threats and talking about theories regarding the whereabouts of "the cat who murdered Grey". Some of the lead theories: "the murderer cat is working with Panda/the big bad/the state army", "Manchester the transgender is her twin brother/sister, so he must know something", "she lied to herself for so long that now she thinks she's the real Grey", "she's using Jaden and who know who and how much else", "she genuinly fell in love with Jaden while retaning her murderous side" and such. All of those theories could've been spared if they weren't stubborn and self-absorbed (for the record: Obadiah isn't self-absorbed, but he's still caught in the stream of consciousness. Open to be proved otherwise, but still need to see things with his own eyes, even though he's a much better dog than Blitz and Danny).