Thread:NerdWithAKeyboard/@comment-30470995-20170728220328

hey could You please help me rewrite/improve article about Angela Baker?

here is a link

http://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Angela_Baker

I am talking mainly about section concerning her victims

If You inspect it closely You will see it's badly,not grammatically written

I changed it myself some time ago but when I submitted those changes it said there is some conflict and someone else is editing this page...

However when I checked it there was no one rewriting it but,still,my changes were lost...

A while ago I made second attempt at rewriting it yet it is not finished

can You help me(us,our Wiki community) and improve it?

there are also some other articles which may look good or even perfect on first sight yet are badly written and THEY ARE NOT EVEN IN REWRITE SECTION FOR GOD'S SAKE 