Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190706142344/@comment-4708882-20190831152327

Admittedly it's a little weird the first one isn't as surprising but I wish you the best, a recommendation is to defy the "nice one is the killer" by making them a little rude or not meant to be charming and appear a few times or so, the nice guy being shown more and mislead the audience into thinking they are the criminal responsible. Not sure I'd call them surprise if the question is just "where is he" unless he is in disguise and acts like a totally different character though a mystery still would exist.

Now the hacker does sound rather interesting and surprising the uncle I am unsure of if truly a surprise but depends on the act, there isn't a rule against more than one in the same arc but he uncle's boss doesn't sound like it but just one not shown much.