Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20181201153231/@comment-4708882-20181219012025

I'm glad you like the sound, the few I sent the rough draft said it's kind of like Hellsing and a Black Butler mix. Even now I'm nowhere near done with the story, just a little over half with the first season. While I wouldn't mind helping with a story I don't write much due to lack of free time that said I could possibly help cons with concepts and characters.

The uncle thing could work though needs to make it clear she's only a pawn to him either through clearly abusive treatment or mentally noting it.

With Jester a lot came overtime where originally he had only a very minor redeeming quality or two but later evolved to show a more complex character of a broken man taking it out on the world hoping eventually he'd die in a battle, Corvus is and almost always meant to be the charming seemingly gentleman that hides the cold individual, Douglas was originally more sympathetic and just a knowledge seeker but ultimately came out a twisted monster, Jessica was originally a hero/neutral character which while true part of the story changed for the time skip for later parts. The only two I always decided to be heartless were "God" and Sir Thomas, the Angel of Death was never set in stone on how terrible until the end. Sir Thomas is definitely a Hate Sink that is the absolute worse traits of his era: a racist and sexist bully who abused his power to do whatever he could to get his way.