Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20180905160147/@comment-29414935-20181127115520

I have began working on a new story with a good friend. It's like a metropole in the modern time with anthropomorphic animals (again) and is about a group of teenagers who have problems in their life the older they get. It's like a mixture of Zootopia and Night in the Woods. It's comedy like and we try to make it more realistic in terms of world setting and characteristics. And the modern technology of today of course. We have not a name yet and not that many characters. We have just two characters, the main protagonist and the main antagonist. Also the plot. We first weren't sure if this story need necessairly a villain (all stories of mine do) but it's not as interesting, so we got forward to the main plot, and how the villain can plays in. So we got the idea of a interesting "hidden villain" which is completely disguised and kidnaps and kills children and teenager. The only things that are left of him and founded by the teenager group or police is just mutilated body parts. So you don't see the actual kill itself. In the end it's revealed (Spoiler warning, if we really can make this story in the future happening, lol) that it is the teacher of the protagonist. He do all of that because he is annoyed by most children and teenagers wronged him sometimes. So he hate them. That's all we had right now. Sounds good?

Also, we are not far enough and hadn't a full motivation yet (maybe it stays like that for the teacher), but I was wondering if he would be more Tragic or more Pure Evil. I think more Pure Evil because it's not an excuse what he did, because he kills also innocent children and teenager, and want all of them dead in the town. So what did you think?