Thread:Panzysoldat/@comment-31330278-20190725214555/@comment-31617896-20190903064850

1A: A proofreader is someone that reads through someone's work and corrects any mistake in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.

It's interesting. But, the story goes quick, and I don't know if it was a good idea to combine the movie and the show. Also, a huge issue is your use of tense.

Examples:

"but Rita shuting her up" - Correction: but Rita shuts her up.

"they both cornering Rita and Gretchen" - They both corner Rita and Gretchen.

2: I don't think so. The novel's pretty expensive.

3: Not really. I haven't watched any of those films.

4: Oh. I think Judgeface would be a good nickname for a vigilante Ghostface.

5: I know you have a connection to Jamal, but I would honestly say he's a bad man/woman, just like every other Ghostface. MIG's wouldn't kill or attack people who are innocent or have nothing to do with their goals. Jamal almost killed Liv's dad.