Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190706142344/@comment-29414935-20190716000121

Also, is it enough in your opinion, if a villain in a story for children is a assassin and kills people for money, and you see the "corpses" of their victims? Because in the more lighthearted story, there is that lizard assassin girl who is hired to kill the protagonist and you can see that she is collecting the tails of her victims. She is a serial killer. And she is even rude to her customers. I first thought I wrote her like an "On & Off" character, but now I think I haven't and she has nothing positive to her. Even sadisticly smiling when the main antagonist (her customer) kills one of his men by accident.

But after her, there is a villain I already told you about, who seems much worse. A technician and scientist who developes a laser where he kills one of the agents onscreen and have killed many agents offscreen. It is even stated that he destroyed an entire island with it, with maybe creatures on there. He then goes on an rampage and nearly killed many innocents, including children, on a boot and airplane. His final plan is, to destroy the entire island of Hawaii. The only think that could help her count would be the ressources and the fact there is a very low heinous standard in this story.