Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-29414935-20190923113331/@comment-29414935-20191001150631

Yeah. I also leaning more towards sympathic and understandable to him.

Also, a fun fact is, that most times in my stories, if someone got a love interest, it stays that one and is never reall changed. But sometimes I have protagonist who got multiple love interests. Like the anthro dog Jack in the story with the raven guy, military wolf guy etc. He is a casanova who reaches very easily the hearts of women, also because of his charm and looks. He got the love interest he stays with, the reporter fox lady who first refuses to fall in love with him but later changes and becomes his true and only love, then a husky lady who was the girlfriend before the fox lady and later appears as a villain but in the end redeems herself again, and now I got another love interest who was before these two, an australian shepherd lady who was a soldier in the army with him. With the last one, we never see her again in the later story and we didn't know what exactly happened to her. But I will let her be mentioned by him. She didn't die, so it's like they broke up or he left her, and never got in contact anymore, not even friends. He had multiple girlfriends but these three are just known by names and are important characters to the story. And in the other story, the wolf lady, also got multiple boyfriends and also implied to had a girlfriend at one moment, but all of them are just mentioned by her in a joke. When the deuteragonist who is in love with her, ask if she is in love or if she has a boyfriend at the moment. Then she lists down all her relationships what is shocking him.

Where I mention it, I also got a joke that two criminals talk about her incredibly "badassness", and then it's like one says "There are rumors that she had stabbed someone to death with a spoon!" and the other one says "How is that even possible?!". And maybe they got murdered by her with a spoon afterwards, but I don't want to make it too comedic, because it's after all a serious story mostly with just small jokes. That's a thing I have problems with and can't do really great: Jokes or funny moments. I don't know why but maybe it's because I always don't know where it can fit and play in scenes very well. And also, to balance comedy and seriousness, if it isn't a outright comedy.

Also I already told you that somehow, I refuse to let my female characters suffer too much, and mostly anthro characters somehow. But that's with many story writer I noticed. And I don't know it's a bad or a good thing...I mean, sure every character in my story suffers to some degree but mostly the male ones more. Like the wolf lady with electro shocks and near death but there just because it's necessary for the story and so it must be like that. But it's not bloody or something. Also torture scenes or open bloody wounds never really happen to my female characters, with a few human exceptions. Mostly "just" bruises and this kind. I planned to change that with the australian shepherd lady, that she got stabbed in the ribs and nearly bleeds out, but don't know yet if I would do that....because it's sure a more darker setting but not that dark and like I said, I mostly tame down and tone down my stories because I think some are too dark and bloody.