Thread:Loudfan21000/@comment-24200891-20180830193959/@comment-24200891-20181124074811

I read your review and I agree on this, too much fighting and both Louds and Casagrandes suffered on mob mentality. It's too many characters. Did you know, that to keep 22 minutes most of Luan's lines were cut out?

Thanks for the link. I am not into musicals either, but this episode was enjoyable. I liked Luna's 1st song, Lana's song, Lisa's song, Luan's 1st song, Lucy's poem, the world song. I didn't like Lola's, Lynn's, parents' song and Clincoln Song. I didn't enjoy Luna's second song. Why the heck Lincoln couldn't sing alone and why does he have to be with Clyde again? They are not Shaggy and Scooby to be together everywhere. After all songs distracted me from the plot, I focused on it. Luna wanted her song to win, so she made little marketing search. Her 2nd song was inferior to the 1st one in my opinion. Then we learned the dark side of show business, music producers changed Luna into who she isn't and even made her use playback. I don't like using playback, because it's lazy. Luna's new outfit wasn't bad, but needed different colors and her new name Lulu was pathetic. The plot is simple and predictible, but passable and I think this episode is good, but not great like for example Head Poet Anxiety.

I fixed and reuploaded my HW special Sinful Night. What do you think of it? In Word it took 23 pages. https://www.deviantart.com/firstdrellspectre/art/Loud-House-Fanfiction-Sinful-night-773834693