Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-31330278-20190813233236/@comment-31330278-20191007100729

1. You're saying she was repulsed by Roman's sadism and wanted Milton to die in jail vs get murdered right in front of her? I had moments of thinking about that, but being sad and frighten to see the man who gang raped her mother being killed isn't a sentiment I would have. Now when you're saying it, it does make sense. But the fact Milton had a major part at creating the whole situation, which is a great dubious fit consider his resources, might count for something. Or does the fact he technically not a killer might confuse people?

2. I'm also thinking about using the sympathetic orc witch in the following ways:

A. Mankind Reloaded - Not all orcs are like Khelshot. Many of them have understandable motives and will take their tragic background to hilling rather than to killing. One of them is a witch who works as the leader of the green fire clan. She use the powers granted from Tyrant for keeping her clan safe and well-fed. The leaders of mankind see her as a relatively level-headed orc. When Giovani (the humans court mage) and Archiver (the dwarves court mage) will enter the orcs in, with emphasis on the red hand clan led by Kazmal the warlock, Elphaba (I have no better name for her right now) will be the missing in goodness leader of the outer orcs (currently to part 2, every orc who refused to Giovani and Archiver's integration plan is an outer). Since the human king was murdered by Giovani, the dwarven king died in battle and the elven king got killed during Tyrant's first blasting (you know dragons. One dragon can destroy achievements of decades in less than five minutes), Elphaba will be the highest-ranked positive character. Not Hawarged and Katelyn, but still a very powerful positive leader, or at the very least one of the major resistance factors.

B Royal Solitude - In the wake of the human king's disappearance, the orange dragon is the supreme ruler of the human kingdoms, and also spread his reign to some of the non-human members of mankind, including orcs. He'll have some lords and ladies from all kind of people, one of them is Armada and the human king as her amnestic squire, and the afformed orc witch will be a leading candidate to become the dragon champion (think of a royal champion, but for a dragon). The presence of the dragon and some non-human high-ranked individual in the human kingdom will drive some racists mad. Lord Claymore will take his racism one step forward and help Paulus training his inquisition forces. In Paulus' offence, taking Claymore for training his new special troops was his own idea. It's just that Claymore was frighteningly quick to answer the call. Elphaba's role will be both working as the dragon's lead champ candidate and to help restoring the human king to his former self.

3. Grey will refer to Red's almost demonic nature when confronting Panda. He was grief-stricken from Red's death, not concerned at all from what Red did (asking "Red... What have she done to you?", and asking one more time after Grey replies "what i'll do to anyone who'll hurt Jaden"). In her words, "killing Red is no murder. It's an act of charity". Grey was always tough, but her fight with Panda after killing Red is the only moment in the story (at least in part 1) where she was outright vicious. John Snow killing Tanner kind of vicious. I purposely say "John Snow killing Tanner" and not "Sansa executing Ramsay using his own dogs", because Red is more pragmatic and realistic than Ramsay. If you want to compare Red to a GOW character, think of him as a younger and more battle-ready version of Walder Frey. And more importantly, Grey is planned to be more heroic and fitting to her position than Sansa. More like Jane Snow than like Sansa. Now when you're saying it, Kith Harrington will be perfect as Jaden. He's planned to be pure soul, but he still have some John Snow features in him. And if we get deeper to GOT and "Chernobyl IL" comparisons, would you like to see a character similar to Daenerys in part 2? I'm not planning to do it right now, but it will take time, and I do want to hear your word before adding/not adding.