Can you imagine if the family wanted to start making Leo's baby book, Lisa would suggest putting the first picture she took of Leopold, which happens to be a clear picture of him still in Rita's womb she took with a special type of camera. The pic isn't actually shown but everyone reacts in disgust from it.
Other than the fact Luna is my favorite Loud sister, another reason I make her so close to Leo is I love her relationship with Lincoln when he was a baby. As she mentioned, Leo reminds her of Lincoln when he was a baby.
Sweet, I can't wait to see it. I can imagine Sam being close with Lily and Leo as well. Now I have a story idea in mind that Sam and Luna spend the day with the babies.
Trey, I imagine owns a gymnasium which originally belonged to his great-grandfather who passed it down to his grandfather then his father then currently him. Working out is Trey's life and that's why he's so cocky about it.
Yes he did. His father taught everything he needs to know. Axel works as an instructor there and Trey sometimes gets jealous because of how much stronger he is than him. All friends workout at Trey's gym sometimes even Zeke and Spike, which explains their medium muscular builds, the worst one working out is their geeky friend Ethan, who has a short and scrawny build.
Trey's grandfather I imagine has a 50s Chuck Berry hairstyle and his father has a 70s style afro and either mustache or beard.
I have thought about giving Trey a distinctive hairstyle like an afro, dreadlocks and even the Mr. T mohawk but then I decided to just give him a simple buzzcut. Maybe his great-grandfather can have the Chuck Berry hairstyle, his grandfather has the 70s afro and his father has the Mr. T mohawk.
Nice choices of hairstyles. It may sound strange, but I prefer when all hair strands have equal length, because I always had this. That's why I am not fan of mohawk and dreadlocks would look much better to me.
Then I saw too few of hockey. It reminds me fight of football hooligans. In Poland they are a serious problem, because they cause lot of cotteral damage and are ready to kill those, who don't support they favorite football team. Back to topic it would make sense for Lynn to fight Hank or Hawk. I don't know if she's strong enough to fight both bullies in same time.
The biggest problem was with hands, because Luna was holding most of his body, so there was little room left for Sam's hand. When I kissed, I had always opened eyes, I don't know why people close eyes during kissing.
Luna had her eyes closed when she kissed Watterson and Lincoln closed his eyes kissing Lily and Luan had her eyes closed kissing Mr. Coconuts. Still the pic is very cute. You should show it on deviantart.
I had an accident. Car door pressed my left thumb and I feel constant pain. I keep it in ice cold water, but about a week will pass before it gets recovered. I can't ride bike, drive car and swim with such pain.
Well don't get me wrong, I actually like it, it's cute because he's just giving affection to his much older sister. But others may get the wrong idea. In the changed version, maybe Luna can be like hugging him while he sleeps and if Luna is sleeping too, she should be reclining 'cause I know no one who can sleep with their head up.
This Monday I come back to my home town. The town I had vacations in was very hot. I could hardly get sleep in this heat. Days were ok, but at nights I could hardly rest.
Would Zeke and Spike work as bouncers? In disco clubs are bouncers who choose who can go into disco and who can't. If they had such high standards that nobody gets into disco club, their boss would have no partons.
Would street performance be not honorable for Axel? He would keep showing how strong he is by breaking bricks or bending thick bars with bare hands.
I'm not sure about Zeke and Spike working as bouncers. If they did, they would probably sleep on the job. Axel I actually plan to make him work as a bodyguard for Anthony Cheng. I actually plan on showing my characters to an animation studio at some point. I hope they like them enough to make a show about them. Cheng I decided while he is still a crimelord, he shall be more of a supporting character rather than antagonist and Zeke and Spike buy their drugs from him.
Axel I actually plan to make him work as a bodyguard for Anthony Cheng. I actually plan on showing my characters to an animation studio at some point. I hope they like them enough to make a show about them. Cheng I decided while he is still a crimelord, he shall be more of a supporting character rather than antagonist and Zeke and Spike buy their drugs from him.
I wish you that animation studio would accept your ideas.
If Axel is Cheng's bodyguard, how does their relations look like? Is Cheng a bad boss to Axel?
In some shows I saw boss constantly complaining on his bodyguard for details or more than necessary damages. Another thing I saw was irony that bodyguard is the biggest threat to his boss. Another funny thing I saw was if the bodyguard saves or helps his boss, then the boss always gets hurt.
Zeke and Spike buy drugs and probably they can't keep their jobs, because the drugs influence them. How about Zeke and Spike try to find job as Cheng's men, but Cheng has too big standards?
I don't know. I'll need to think about all of that. Right now I'm trying to come up with a few more characters for the story. Right now in mind I have a female character but I'm trying to figure out how I will make her in appearance and personality.
I actually plan to give Zeke and Spike two friends who are drug users like them but they are not as addicted to them as their two friends are and thus are more mature than they are. One is a black guy and the other is a female. I still need to find names, designs and personalities for them still though.
Here are my ideas. The female can be Mexican ethnicy.
One of the friends can use drugs, because it's her or his fuel for artistic imagination. It sounds dark, but some artists take drugs to have their imagination work. He or she doesn't use drugs for fun, but for "work".
Another friend can use drugs, because believes she or he is a shaman talking to ghosts in dreams after taking drugs.
Well I actually imagined them as slackers as well. They live with Spike and Zeke in an apartment. But to pay rent, at least one of them will need a job. I'll consider using your ideas though. Right now, I'm more focused on the designs of the two other characters. I have thought about the girl being Hispanic and even liked the name Maya.
Let's try to brainstorm with the designs for the male and female characters. Well for the African-American male, I did imagine him having a shaved head and a goatee and wearing a light blue sweatshirt. And for the female, I think she should be caucasian instead.
I can do racial variety but not with every single character. Now I have idea for another character, an elderly person whom Zeke and Spike get the nerves on frequently.
The hairstyle you described would be a mohawk and I don't think this hairstyle would suit him. I now think he can be a Jamaican immigrant with long dreadlocks (which are usually concealed inside a Rhasta hat) and a goatee and he can have a piercing under his chin, and he is tall and lanky and wears either a black t-shirt or tank top with the Jamaican flag on it, gray shorts and sandals. His appearance could be based on legendary Reggae singer Bob Marley.
As for the girl, I think she should have short hairstyle (because now there's two members with long hair and Spike has short hair). She's the one character whose design I can't decide on. I have thought about making a Goth or punk girl or even a rockstar girl like Luna and would use her design here for inspiration but now I think it would be too much copying on her. Now I'm not sure. If she is to be a goth or punk she would wear boots but I do imagine her wearing sneakers too.
Dreadlocks are very hard to wash, so people complain if he doesn't do this. His outfit sounds good to me.
There is a type of goth called "perky goth", meaning interested in dark stuff, but is happy and friendly. Most goths say they are not true goths. The girl can be a fan of punk and rock music, dressing like rocker, but be not good at playing. Instead of skull she can have fist with metal brass knuckle drawn on shirt. She can also wear a leather vest. Rock attire is quite expensive, so she can pay more attention to her top and not much to her trousers and shoes.
Oh, that hairdo would be okay. Now I'm thinking twice about making him Jamaican. Not because of his hair but because I'm not sure if it would be suitable.
As for girl, I'm not sure if I want to make dress like a punk or goth. This hairstyle could be suitable though, though I might make it in different color because I think Zeke should be the only redhead. I think she should have brown eyes though and freckles and should have a nose ring and a necklace.
I finally figured out how to make the black guy. I'll just make him have a regular short haircut and goatee. He'll wear a grey t-shirt, black jeans and white shoes.
For the girl, maybe she can have either dark brown or black hair and of course nose piercing and necklace. She should have a tattoo of a rose on one of her arms. She should wear a black shirt with very short sleeves and right now I'm deciding whether she should wear a skirt with tights or pants and either boots or sneakers. Also if you have different idea for hair, I'll consider it.
Good you made some choices. What picture can be on the grey t-shirt?
Dark brown hair is preetier than black. Hairstyle like this girl on photo is ok in my opinion. Tatoo of rose was used so many times, what about lizard? Pants are more practical and they are easier to move in them than skirt.
Then I'll make her wear pants. I have also thought about making her glasses. Lizard is used as much so I don't know.
And as for the black male, I have changed my idea about him. He is now going to be an extremely obese guy and a running gag is that he almost always breaks something unintentionally because of his weight.
I now think both of the characters will all be as big of drug users as Zeke and Spike. In the episodes, they will cause all sorts of trouble.
I can imagine Lola and one of her siblings in a situation like this. I imagine Lola being in Kuzco's role, who do you imagine having Pacha's? It can be any one of the siblings, including Lincoln. In case you haven't seen this movie, Pacha is the fat guy and Kuzco is the talking llama. https://youtu.be/BFkd73G0fDI
I never watched the film. In Pacha's role would be Liam, because he's a farm boy and Pacha is a farmer. Lola would panic, because of scorpions and bats, but who wouldn't? Lana likes animals, but she surely doesn't like being stinged or bitten.
Actually it could be anyone of the siblings that could get stuck in this situation with Lola, even the weakest sibling, not counting the babies but I think it would be best with one of her older siblings. Here's part one of this scene.
Well I wasn't counting the scene where Kuzco just leaves Pacha. But I can imagine her and the sibling fighting like they do. Lincoln would be funny in this place and he gets the scorpions in his shirt and he bangs on the side of cliff, causing bats to wake up and fly into Lola's mouth.
And then Luna says she doesn't know and suspects Luan brought him there. Luan denies and realises Leo just fell and accuses Luna for being careless and then they argue and Leo cries, because he hates when his siblings argue.
Lori works too. Lori would at first say in annoyed expression "Leni, that's a cube of garbage." but then realize what Leni thinks happens and then Leni would say in a breaking voice "I can still hear their little voices." and Lori would be like "I can hear them, too." but then it turns out the babies are fine.
How is Spike using Lynn Sr.'s razor to shave his armpits harmless? Lynn Sr. uses that to shave his face and Spike is using it on his filthy armpits, that's fucking disgusting. Spike is pretty much Zeke's only relative but at least Lucy has a pretend corpse.
Maybe I don't because I care for my personal hygiene too much.
Would Grouse start accusing, everyone who gets into his head? Once, when I didn't know who damaged my properity, I accused everyone around.
Hard question. Mr Grouse would yell this to Lynn Sr, if he was very annoyed. Tetherby would yell this to everyone, who's not rich. In his old job Lynn Sr had a female coulage, who hated his daughters, so she would yell at him too.
Are you going to update the pic of Luna and Leo sleeping sometime?
Maybe Zeke and Spike take over as Luna's roadie after they injure Chunk by shooting him with a gun, mistaking him for a thug robbing Luna. They mention that the town they live in is full of them and that's why they always pack heat.
They shot him in front of Luna actually as Chunk was loading her stuff into his van. Obviously Chunk doesn't die but he is seriously injured and is taken away by the ambulance, much to Luna's shock. They then explain they thought he was a thug stealing her stuff and that in their town, you can't be too careful. They would mess up being roadies as well though.
They live in one town and they are on a road trip and they stopped in Royal Woods. The town they live in has Anthony Cheng because they buy their drugs from him regularly.
All I have for backstory is they had moms who both worked as strippers and they always caused trouble as boys. I did also consider an idea for a nanny whom they always tormented which eventually lead to her going insane.
They are addicts, so can you imagine, what happens if they are out of drugs?
They won't have a dark backstories like Rarosh from Watchmen, right? He was a son of stripper who once accidentally interrupted her mom's date, so she slapped him and told him that she should have abortion. Zeke and Spike don't have this, right?
Well no. They are comical characters, not dark. Their nanny went so crazy, that she jumped out of a window screaming maniacally to her death. The boys thought it was hilarious because they caused her to go nuts and they still find it funny to this day.
Hard to say if they were off of drugs. That's like asking if Otto from Simpsons was off of drugs, they probably wouldn't be as crazy.
Good then. The boys remind me Bart Simpson then, because he as younger caused his nanny go insane.
In 2011 animated film Tintin was a constantly drunk captain, who on desert went sobber after so many years and he was confused like he's awakened from a very long dream. Contact with reality was very brutal for him.
https://youtu.be/qeKR2mmQ69w?t=69 If Zeke and Spike had an argument with the the Loud family, Spike would be the one removing Lisa's wig saying "And you're bald!" and Zeke would be the one saying to Lynn Sr. "Good, your house sucks!"
One of the siblings could comment that Spike and Zeke are more of identical twins than Lola and Lana and a misunderstanding Leni says "But they don't look anything alike." and Lisa explains that it's their behaviors and habits that are identical and not their physical appearances.
With all those drugs their brains would be stimulised to use imagination. Flip would deserve such pranks. Zeke and Spike would often prank Flip for selling flawed products.
Leo usually cries, when he sees strangers, but he would cry on sight of Flip every time, because Leo senses his evil. In "Absent Minded" Flip used many aliases, when he was selling various things. I wouldn't be surprised, if Flip wasn't his real name. I suspect he changes names and homes, because he's a wanted criminal for his scams in many states.
Zeke and Spike would make a prank that they put advertisement that Flip gives free beer, so lot of customers go to Flip. However Flip can't give them beer, because he does nothing for free and because of this he loses lots of credibility. Zeke and Spike observer how he's happy that lot of customers come and how he changes his face experssion, because he learns why they all come to him.
Flip probably isn't his real name. A criminal in jail knew who he was. Customers would probably trash Flip's store for false advertisement while Spike and Zeke just laugh.
Imagine if during a concert with Luna and Sam and others if Spike and Zeke came on stage naked. There is a band Red Hot Chili Peppers that perform naked. Coincidentally, Zeke's appearance is based on the lead singer of the band. Lots of the females would stare at their genitals and be attracted to their well built bodies.
I never heard of such naked performance. On this concert Luna and Sam would be angry, because Spike and Zeke stole their spotlight by this. Nothing attracts eyes more than nudity. Luna and Sam would even consider if continuing playing and singing makes sense anymore.
I would be so shocked as well. The sister would cover both eyes and ears of the babies. For example Luna is holding Leo, Leni is holding Lily, Luan is sitting between Luna and Leni. Leni and Luna are covering ears of the babies they are holding, when Luan is covering eyes of both babies.
I am in middle of writing twin birth, but I have problem with fear of repetetivity. Would this be too repetetive, if elder siblings played with baby siblings by plushies and blocks 3rd time? I ask, because I don't want to be accused of writing the same over and over again.
Would this work for Zeke and Spike? They consumed so much drugs that they developped strong resistance to pain. Also rats each some of poison to develop resistance, so would Zeke and Spike no longer have fun after same drugs, so they seek new kinds of drugs they haven't tried yet?
Tell me what you think of this cartoon idea, 100 Years of Preschool: a 104 year old man still attends preschool and he develops a crush on his newest teacher after the previous teacher dies suddenly or retires.
This sounds like an absurd comedy. No doubt all other characters would laugh from the 104-year-old man. If he wants to finally grow up to date with the teacher, then it would remind "Fairy Odd Parents Grow Up Timmy". To be honest I don't know if I would feel amused or sorry for the main character, because repeating class was one of my worst fears.
Well it is original and yes, it is stupid but hey lots of cartoons are stupid but funny. I mean look at Family Guy, they have a dog that can talk and is treated as if he is human. I think I may make Sebastian and Ezekiel recurring characters in the show. He is made fun of because he has literally spent 100 years in preschool. I do one concept idea where the old man beats up a bully in the school. I'm still trying to think up of appearances and names for the characters.
Timmy wanted to date Tootie, a girl who was obsessed with him as a kid. I never watched Grow Up Timmy Turner, because it looks like it sucks.
I said it's absurd, but not in negative way. I just said what kind of comdedy it would be. I remember in Family Guy is a talking dog. Another absurd show that was popular was Pinky and the Brain. I admit a 104 man in preschool is an original concept but it needs very funny jokes to be good. I must congratulate you an original idea.
i think Sebastian and Ezekiel should actually originally have been orphans and were raised in an orphanage and their antics drove the owners insane. I imagine if they ever met the boys again, the man would suffer a heart attack, presumably killing him much to the shock of the Loud children.
This must have been an orphanage with very incompetent workers. During meeting Sebastian and Ezekiel they would probably get insane like Frank Grimes in Climax of "Homer's Enemy", but instead of dying they would get injured and lost conciousness. The Louds would keep asking why this happened.
The orphanage workers were competent but Ezekiel and Sebastian always caused havoc making it extremely difficult and almost impossible to handle the boys. I imagine the orphanage workers I imagine being a married couple and the man especially despised the boys and when they return, he becomes horrified causing him to have a heart attack and apparently dies as his body is taken away by ambulance. Like I said, sometimes I like to mix kid and adult humor.
Then Sebastian and Ezekiel were like Bart Simpson up to 11. To be honest I have problem with imagining, what were the boys' antics like. If a heart attack was a reaction of seeing the boys after so long, then the antics must have been incredibly destructive and humiliating.
This may be very dark, but today in tv news I heard that when pregnant women drink alcohol, their children often are born sick or retard or psychologically unstable. Would such origin be too dark for Sebastian's backstory?
All siblings clean backyard from leaves, so if Lana was hanging from tree, everyone would notice she's not working. She would sneak and then put Hops under Lucy's shirt. I mainly picked Lucy because of the grim reaper joke.
Not necessarily, they might not notice. You got to use your imagination. They're cartoon characters. I was thinking more of Izzy. Also one of the older siblings could kneel down giving Lana the chance to reach.
I'll start making the picture this week. I didn't start it earlier, because I was busy with writing Twin Birth. Lana will use Izzy, but maybe on Lynn, so all siblings will tell her that it's not hockey or something.
I imagine them doing trolley racing, giving fake prices (ridiculously big for peas, extremally low for vaccum cleaner), using strings to use dead fish and squids as puppets to scare customers, impersonating store workers and giving false informations to customers, drinking bear for burping contest and not inteding to pay for it, building statues from cans or other solid products.
But they're not mean, they just have bad tempers if someone insults them. I hate the manager anyway because, well yes, they did cause trouble in his store, but he suspects that they're trouble even when they just got there.
I didn't mean they are mean, they are just unintentioanlly scary to the customers. Are you talking about the store manager from Cereal Offender? I also didn't like his attitude, he behaved very unprofessional. Still he's better than Flip, because he doesn't sell poisoned products and is not a con man.
Think of how disgusting Flip is: Selling expired milk, putting his dirty clothes in the nacho cheese and the fact he has very bad dental hygiene. He definitely deserves to have something gross happen to him. "Smell you later, poopsicle!"
Would Ezekiel and Sebastian find themselves in such situation? They believe they unintentionally killed someone by their antics, so they argue what to do with the body. They are needlessly afraid, because victim of their antics is simply unconcious. However when the victim wakes up, then has legitimate reasons to be mad at Ezekiel and Sebastian.
Perhaps. If the man threatened the press charges, they knock him out again and put him in a plastic bag and leave him in the woods. Can you imagine the man hanging from a tree in the plastic bag struggling to get out with muffled shouting.
The man would have big displeasure in this bag. He swings, so he could fall and get free. This would take him many hours. When he's finally free, he wants satisfaction. Worst for him would be if his shouting attracted animals.
He could possibly suffocate. If he breaks out of the bag, he feels relieved at first, but then he gets surrounded by wolves. I once had a dream where a guy escaped from something and then gets attacked by a wolf.
Yeah, they're from a really bad Christmas special from 1991 called "The Christmas Tree." All of the characters were pretty creepy looking but these kids especially. They look like they're possessed by demons.
Thanks for the video, it was funny to watch. The critic pointed out details I would never notice like eyes of serial killer. Right that characters are so stupid as they fail to notice obvious things. The story is stupid even for a cartoon.
Well like I said, it was based off of a stupid Christmas song. Maybe the movie tried to be stupid on purpose to mock the song? But yeah, the kids' eyes do look like the eyes of a serial killer, probably result of the cheap animation. The song sequences were really random, pointless & really stupid. I'm not sure which one is the stupidest: the fruitcake, Grandpa's song or Grandpa's Gonna Sue the Pants Off of Santa.
I also liked when he joked about the tree looking like a penis and that just hurts when the ornaments pop out.
It would make sense, make a stupid movie just to mock a stupid song. I think you had a good guess. I also don't know what's stupidest. I would not connect the tree with penis, but he has a point. That's another result of cheap animation.
And none of characters' mouths match up with what they are saying. It is implied that the grandfather is suffering from Alzheimer's disease, otherwise he's just a really stupid old man.
Another dumb thing about this special is the ridiculous names: The lead characters' last name is Spankenheimer, the town they live is called Cityville, the dog is named Doofus, the rich man is Austin Bucks, his company is Own All Corp., Cousin Mel's attorney is I.M. Slime and the district attorney is Hardtongue.